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9/21/2014 c1 U7Hb83dyus567g
This is very good. For a young person writing porn it is hard. Good job comrade.
9/11/2014 c1 42HatefulRodeo
As much as I love adorable bottom China I loved your portrayal of him in this fic! Amazingly well done! Thanks for writing. Cheers.
8/9/2014 c1 30lexdelapp
Omg you are AMAZING at writing! I'm jelly! XD
8/2/2014 c1 Amelia
The title is awesome, aru. I love the story, and you should definitely become one with Mother Russia, da?
7/28/2014 c1 omgsogood
Hfbdgsjsidjehbdjsjebdjsbdudv sorry, i was wiping my nosebleed off of my keys. Yay for possesive!yao! I adore this fic. I litterally sighed up just to favorite stories like theese. Also i can totslly spall... Stupid mobile!
6/13/2014 c1 Guest
Best RoChu lemon EVER.
12/28/2013 c1 Dan
This fic man, this fic. I've been wanting to review for a while, but I never finished reading it for some reason.
I absolutely LOVED how you portrayed China here. I've read many RoChu fanfics with WAAAY to much innocent China. It gets a little old, ya know?
Your writing style is amazing. I really wish I could write like this. One day! **
The smut did not suck. It was pretty good, I liked it.
Anyway, loved the fic!
9/26/2013 c1 AngelRuby235
Are you kidding me,pal? Ds smut was great! And having a possessive & aggressive China was a refreshing change:-) don't worry you have done a fine job at writing a RoChu smut...thanks for the fic,pal!
6/7/2013 c1 5stormy247
it feels even sexier reading it the 3rd time. God I love this fic!
6/1/2013 c1 hetalianpride
well done! i thought it was really awesome. :)
1/3/2013 c1 Guest
three words. THIS. WAS. AWESOME! anyway keep up the good work amigo *winks* :)
3/16/2012 c1 5THE DARK WEEABOO PAST
Not caring if I was late, THAT WAS AWESOME! :pukesrainbows: Reminds me of something... Gosh, this is way more awesome than the other IE fanfics I've read. Well... still, it was AWESOOOOME! Please make more!
11/12/2011 c1 AShatteredOne
So, I really liked this fic. I also really like fics where they use the title in the fic. I almost always do that when I write.

I hope you wouldn't mind some 'constructive critisim' for this. If you don't want it, you can stop reading here.

So, this was a really good China x Russia fic. (oh, and sorry if I have mispellings. I'm doing this on my DSI and I lost my stylis and I ave to type with my large hand (for someone my age, it's large)) I'm not sure if it was this fic, it might have been te last one, but I was a little lost at the beginning. I also really like your writing style, it's very similar to mine. (I'm hearing creepy noises. It's almost 1 a.m. here and I just watched Paint it. White! for the 3rd time in 24 hours so they're freaking me out and making it hard to think...) I'm trying to remember... this was your first lemon, right? I think it came out very well! I've been trying to write a good lemon for like 3 years! Well, for you it was 4 months put to good use. I like how you picture China, he seems... interesting... Much different than the other lemons with China in them tonight (or tecnecly the morning). I like it! I think we might be able to be good friends...
11/4/2011 c1 xFloodedLungs
Wow, this is one of the best RoChu fics I've read on FFN. I know some people are saying Yao was OOC but I don't think he was at all. I hate when he's portrayed as a blushing virginal uke. OTL anyway, great job!
8/31/2011 c1 1Scarlet daydreamer
Four months deserves a review, even though I hate reviewing lemons because it means that I'm admitting that I read them. It was actually pretty good, although Yao was really OOC in the beginning especially but you were kinda trying to make him dominant and so he HAD to be OOC at least a bit. The end was much better because I felt he mellowed out a bit. The smut was good. For some reason all smut writers think that their lemons are awful. Anyways, you got a review from me, be proud!
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