for Dumbledore's Disappointing Day7/1/2013 c1 
8McQueriosity
First off, I love your Dumbledore. Love how sincere he was and can imagine the puppy dog eyes he's giving as he's being told off
Think your McGonagall was a bit out of character, but consistent so it didn't bother me too much.
You should write more
8McQueriosityFirst off, I love your Dumbledore. Love how sincere he was and can imagine the puppy dog eyes he's giving as he's being told off
Think your McGonagall was a bit out of character, but consistent so it didn't bother me too much.
You should write more
10/7/2011 c1 15Witherwings01
Well, first up, bravo for putting yourself out there. It takes guts to present your work to the world like this.
As for the story itself, the concept was interesting in that the challenges were never originally intended to protect the stone and I liked your portrayal of Albus ('Woe, to be so misunderstood' was a favourite line). Your Snape was also spot on in all his ambiguous glory.
You certainly have something that intrigues me as a reader - perhaps you will write more?
Cheers
Wings
15Witherwings01Well, first up, bravo for putting yourself out there. It takes guts to present your work to the world like this.
As for the story itself, the concept was interesting in that the challenges were never originally intended to protect the stone and I liked your portrayal of Albus ('Woe, to be so misunderstood' was a favourite line). Your Snape was also spot on in all his ambiguous glory.
You certainly have something that intrigues me as a reader - perhaps you will write more?
Cheers
Wings