8/1/2013 c1 13TallestCora
Hey, when are you going to update this? 'Cause it's AWESOME! I love all the set-up and the explanations -very good job on the writing! PRETTY-PLEASE update this with sugar and cherries on top! I LOVE THIS!
Hey, when are you going to update this? 'Cause it's AWESOME! I love all the set-up and the explanations -very good job on the writing! PRETTY-PLEASE update this with sugar and cherries on top! I LOVE THIS!
6/20/2013 c1 38cupidity11
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah why isn't there more? I really like this idea, although I should point out that in The Room With a Moose, Zim wasn't on the bus with Dib. But, IDC because portal/IZ crossover I think their reactions are pretty IC too. Dib's especially, with the experimentation on his part with the shoes.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah why isn't there more? I really like this idea, although I should point out that in The Room With a Moose, Zim wasn't on the bus with Dib. But, IDC because portal/IZ crossover I think their reactions are pretty IC too. Dib's especially, with the experimentation on his part with the shoes.
8/9/2012 c1 Guest
You killed it. ); The fanfic is dead and its your fault. But, only you can save it. Add more chapters and it will live again. Call me, Spark of Demensions.
You killed it. ); The fanfic is dead and its your fault. But, only you can save it. Add more chapters and it will live again. Call me, Spark of Demensions.
8/9/2012 c1 InvaderZaz
Aww, why didn't you continue? It seemed good.
Aww, why didn't you continue? It seemed good.
6/18/2012 c1 3Pokemonic
This is amazing! There's great vocabulary, and I'm really looking forward to upcoming chapters! This story is very inspiring, especially to advanced writers like myself. (Although, this account remains unused much, so a lot of my crappy stuff is here. I really should get into this again.) There is an excellent use of word variation and grammar, and I see you've used Spell-Check efficiently, yes? Zim and Dib are perfectly in character, though it would be funny to see GIR here as well, but I wouldn't personally consider this a humorous fiction. My star rating for this fiction... 5/5 Stars!
This is amazing! There's great vocabulary, and I'm really looking forward to upcoming chapters! This story is very inspiring, especially to advanced writers like myself. (Although, this account remains unused much, so a lot of my crappy stuff is here. I really should get into this again.) There is an excellent use of word variation and grammar, and I see you've used Spell-Check efficiently, yes? Zim and Dib are perfectly in character, though it would be funny to see GIR here as well, but I wouldn't personally consider this a humorous fiction. My star rating for this fiction... 5/5 Stars!
2/1/2012 c1 Joseph Friedman
I think you should continue it. It's good so far, and it should have more chapters to it eventually, seriosuly. :)
I think you should continue it. It's good so far, and it should have more chapters to it eventually, seriosuly. :)
12/26/2011 c1 Raynespell
I really found this interesting; I don't usually like crossovers, but if you plan to write more of this I'll definately be checking back.
I really found this interesting; I don't usually like crossovers, but if you plan to write more of this I'll definately be checking back.
10/20/2011 c1 13Sora with an S
Oh jeez.
Those two are going to die.
Knowing GlaDOS, in an undignified manner.
Oh jeez.
Those two are going to die.
Knowing GlaDOS, in an undignified manner.