for Rememberance9/15/2003 c1 
5Vandesdelca
Another fine story! I liked the necklace, and how the old Ramirez acted. How do you write so well?
5VandesdelcaAnother fine story! I liked the necklace, and how the old Ramirez acted. How do you write so well?
6/2/2002 c1 16terabient
When I first wrote this, I didn't know how much older Ramirez was than Fina, so I guessed. Later on someone told me the ages of all the characters, and the gap between Ramirez and Fina was MUCH greater than I had thought. I tried to correct all of the age references I made ealier, but I probably missed some. ^_^ Sorry for any confusion it caused.
16terabientWhen I first wrote this, I didn't know how much older Ramirez was than Fina, so I guessed. Later on someone told me the ages of all the characters, and the gap between Ramirez and Fina was MUCH greater than I had thought. I tried to correct all of the age references I made ealier, but I probably missed some. ^_^ Sorry for any confusion it caused.
6/1/2002 c1 adfegg
nice story, but you seem to keep changing your mind about how many years older Ramirez is than Fina.
nice story, but you seem to keep changing your mind about how many years older Ramirez is than Fina.
4/26/2002 c1 Eternum
This was great! The description of Fina's impressions of the Silver Shrine are cool, and it's plain to see that you spent a good deal of time writing this!
This was great! The description of Fina's impressions of the Silver Shrine are cool, and it's plain to see that you spent a good deal of time writing this!
4/12/2002 c1 Rowan Seven
Wonderful. Your portrayal of Fina and Ramirez's relationship back on the Silver Shrine was heartbreaking in its happiness and friendliness when one takes into consideration what happened to them in the future. The writing style was captivating and well done, too.
Wonderful. Your portrayal of Fina and Ramirez's relationship back on the Silver Shrine was heartbreaking in its happiness and friendliness when one takes into consideration what happened to them in the future. The writing style was captivating and well done, too.
4/12/2002 c1 Amy Rose
Cool... Like a lot! Good work!
;)
Cool... Like a lot! Good work!
;)