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11/3/2011 c1 Rebeckah
I think that's the poem that was read at a funeral of someone who really did not deserve something so beautiful.
6/23/2011 c1 31We Are The Stuff Of Legends
I think that this is really, really, good for your first fic. Your sentences are a bit long and they run on, as well as some don't really make sense. Also, watch your grammar in some of your sentences: ie. Me and Stefan came along; it should really read Stefan and I came along.

All in all, I like this story and you have really good potential :)keep writing and I'm sorry if your insulted by my cc :)
6/22/2011 c1 DELETEACCOUNTPLEASETHANKS
Beautiful story, really well written! I do have one question, did you write the poem? If you did, you are amazing! It's very touching :) Good job!

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