for Vampire Lore 1012/13/2013 c1 
37Black Hawk
LOL! Awww that was so cute! You have such a grip on the characters and write them perfectly! Thank you!
37Black HawkLOL! Awww that was so cute! You have such a grip on the characters and write them perfectly! Thank you!
4/28/2012 c1 31ParzivalHallows
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOO Mitchell you git! XD I loved this. I could so see Annie wondering about that.
31ParzivalHallowsLMFAOOOOOOOOOOO Mitchell you git! XD I loved this. I could so see Annie wondering about that.
3/14/2012 c1 1Necromecha
Amazing job on this one it had me giggling like a school girl- I really enjoyed it!
1NecromechaAmazing job on this one it had me giggling like a school girl- I really enjoyed it!
1/11/2012 c1 UBEAPPY2
I love these short stories! Great portrayal of Annie and Mitchell. I could picture them and hear them saying the words as I read. Loved it!
I love these short stories! Great portrayal of Annie and Mitchell. I could picture them and hear them saying the words as I read. Loved it!
7/5/2011 c1 AmyLisa
Hahahshsjhs oh that was beautiful :'3 that last line love it.
Hahahshsjhs oh that was beautiful :'3 that last line love it.
6/26/2011 c1 melodiesintheair
cute cute cute! im glad i've seen enough of the show to read this.
since i suck at concrit or anything, i'll just let you know that you have a typo towards the end: "A genuine smile spread across his face as we watched" should be "he" instead of "we"?
cute cute cute! im glad i've seen enough of the show to read this.
since i suck at concrit or anything, i'll just let you know that you have a typo towards the end: "A genuine smile spread across his face as we watched" should be "he" instead of "we"?
6/25/2011 c1 13WhiteHare
Really heard Annie clearly there, and she's a difficult voice to capture for me, so bravo! Keep 'em coming.
13WhiteHareReally heard Annie clearly there, and she's a difficult voice to capture for me, so bravo! Keep 'em coming.
6/25/2011 c1 27SAINTIXE56
BATS...the mystery no one dared to ask Toby Whithouse; thanks for letting it in the open and thanks for the sprakling reference
27SAINTIXE56BATS...the mystery no one dared to ask Toby Whithouse; thanks for letting it in the open and thanks for the sprakling reference
6/25/2011 c1 163Frankie McStein
Oh my god! *dies laughing* That captured series one Mitchell (who I missed terribly during series 2 and 3) so perfectly! Well done! Really, really well done!
163Frankie McSteinOh my god! *dies laughing* That captured series one Mitchell (who I missed terribly during series 2 and 3) so perfectly! Well done! Really, really well done!