12/31/2020 c1 Zera.Craft07
Omoshiroi! Plz continue, im very interested. Also this is way better than other 1st stories I’ve seen. Just fine-tune the grammer and draw out the scenes a little bit with detail and you’ll be good.
Omoshiroi! Plz continue, im very interested. Also this is way better than other 1st stories I’ve seen. Just fine-tune the grammer and draw out the scenes a little bit with detail and you’ll be good.
7/18/2018 c1 Guest
More please
More please
7/1/2018 c1 Guest
More please
More please
10/3/2017 c1 Guest
More plz
More plz
9/20/2013 c1 Guest
Please continue, I like this story very much
Please continue, I like this story very much
11/7/2012 c1 gaara
why you no have more chappies?
why you no have more chappies?
8/7/2012 c1 Annabelle
i like the idea that he uses naruto charaters to change himself. Have you considered shikamaru or zabuza charater traits he could pick up?
i like the idea that he uses naruto charaters to change himself. Have you considered shikamaru or zabuza charater traits he could pick up?
7/14/2012 c1 xbamsod
This sounds like it can be a really interesting story. I'm looking forward to seeing what else Harry does before he goes to Hogwarts. Update Soon _
This sounds like it can be a really interesting story. I'm looking forward to seeing what else Harry does before he goes to Hogwarts. Update Soon _
2/29/2012 c1 Cate
Capitals are used to start sentences.
Capitals are used to start sentences.