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6/13/2016 c1 RoseBloodmane
Very interesting, but would be nice if you made a story out of this... Don't get me wrong I don't like the fact that Fate died or tragedy stories... although i do like the idea of nanoha turning to the dark side for a few chapters... Mater of speaking I have a fan fiction story that I plan to make with something like that in it... although she didn't turn because of a tragedy like yours... she turned for a whole different reason, which I will not say...

Anyways enjoyed reading you short story even if it was a tragedy story.
8/5/2013 c1 Preier
the subject matter is very much not my cup of tea (much disliking of angst and suicidal rage), but it's rather well done all the same.

thank you for sharing your stories
7/4/2012 c1 Shattered.World.Hollow.Sky
Wow. Just... wow.
This takes berserk rage up to eleven.
12/23/2011 c1 EB
This is seriously really really good, I most definatly believe this is what would've happened if Fate had died. Although if that was the case I'm pretty sure Arf would've been right there with her :D
11/17/2011 c1 2Not-Always-Fanfiction
This is very, very sad, but very, very good, I could really see this exact thing happening in the TV series, if it was for a 17+ audience.
8/21/2011 c1 2Joylinda
I agree with you If Amy didn't see Fates life signs she would have gone White devil no lie.

Really cold story I like it though
6/26/2011 c1 cricket
Wow... That was seriously, seriously amazing. Such good description and concept! Amazing. Just amazing. Only word I can think of lol. Keep up the good work!
6/25/2011 c1 1Honulicious
WOW this was intense! great fights and descriptions! you seriously need to get someone to draw this new nanoha ;P

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