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10/22/2013 c1 6Innocent Curruption
This is written quite well. You might want to go back someday and add page breaks. The girls who feels left out is Anzu / Tea. I really liked it, for a oneshot that is. Also, a drabble is generally less than a thousand words. Any more than that and it's called a oneshot or a short story.
6/28/2011 c1 5ForeverBlue90
SEQUEL! this story has a lot of potential to become something amazing!
6/27/2011 c1 Triva
This was powerful. The analogies fit perfectly, allowing a different perspective on all of the characters. I greatly enjoyed reading this.
6/27/2011 c1 88Lexvan
Poor Anzu/Tea. To be done like that. It just sucks! But like she said, she can go to the US when she graduates high school! So, it's a win-win!

Great story! Keep it up!

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