for Darker THAN Dark and I Still See The Light2/2/2012 c8 KoRho
I am reading this...ME!...and I like it!
write more! *cracks whip* like now...get typing...seriously go.
I am reading this...ME!...and I like it!
write more! *cracks whip* like now...get typing...seriously go.
8/9/2011 c7 
43RubinAmigo
Wow, evil!Cas is really dark and...evil. Oh my! You weren't lying when you said there was blood and more blood in this chapter. But I liked it and those little pieces of information you give us make me want to know more.
And I love you for the 'manly cuddling'. Made me smile when I read it in the warnings. :D
43RubinAmigoWow, evil!Cas is really dark and...evil. Oh my! You weren't lying when you said there was blood and more blood in this chapter. But I liked it and those little pieces of information you give us make me want to know more.
And I love you for the 'manly cuddling'. Made me smile when I read it in the warnings. :D
8/8/2011 c7 11Castielmyangel143
evil castiel is creepy!
I love the way you wrote him though. very dark and disturbed :)
Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
I hope your move goes well.
11Castielmyangel143evil castiel is creepy!
I love the way you wrote him though. very dark and disturbed :)
Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
I hope your move goes well.
8/6/2011 c1 22Pentakill Lux
It's really not a bad start at all, but it's really hard to stick to, with no commas and a few general punctuations mistakes thrughout. If you fixed this it wouldn't distract so much from what you are trying to say with the words, which seems to be a good story.
22Pentakill LuxIt's really not a bad start at all, but it's really hard to stick to, with no commas and a few general punctuations mistakes thrughout. If you fixed this it wouldn't distract so much from what you are trying to say with the words, which seems to be a good story.
8/6/2011 c6 43RubinAmigo
Okay, I'll start with your last question :D Yes, I'm still enjoying this story. It has an interesting plot and really want to know what is going on.
This chapter was really difficult to read though, because there are no quotation marks and apostrophes. Might be a formatting problem, I don't know, but it'd be helpful if you could fix it.
Okay, question 1: Yeah, I'd like them to go after Bobby.
Question 2: More kissing, definitely and maybe some (manly) cuddling. I really like that. I wouldn't mind them going further, but it seems that Cas wouldn't be comfortable with that yet.
Whatever you decide to do, I'm lookign forward to read more :)
43RubinAmigoOkay, I'll start with your last question :D Yes, I'm still enjoying this story. It has an interesting plot and really want to know what is going on.
This chapter was really difficult to read though, because there are no quotation marks and apostrophes. Might be a formatting problem, I don't know, but it'd be helpful if you could fix it.
Okay, question 1: Yeah, I'd like them to go after Bobby.
Question 2: More kissing, definitely and maybe some (manly) cuddling. I really like that. I wouldn't mind them going further, but it seems that Cas wouldn't be comfortable with that yet.
Whatever you decide to do, I'm lookign forward to read more :)
7/30/2011 c5 11Castielmyangel143
AWW! hon your welcome.
Just read the last chapter and loved it, and then i saw this and it made coming back from a vacation a lot better.
Your doing great on your writing and i hope you keep writing this story because I love it :D 3
11Castielmyangel143AWW! hon your welcome.
Just read the last chapter and loved it, and then i saw this and it made coming back from a vacation a lot better.
Your doing great on your writing and i hope you keep writing this story because I love it :D 3
7/25/2011 c4 43RubinAmigo
The part with the phone on Cas' seat was so funny, lol.
But another cliffhanger... Please update soon, I need to know what is going on there.
43RubinAmigoThe part with the phone on Cas' seat was so funny, lol.
But another cliffhanger... Please update soon, I need to know what is going on there.
7/24/2011 c1 2lazy2login
It should be Darker THAN Dark. Not to be nitpicky, but more people might try to read your story if there's not a grammatical error in the actual title of the story.
It should be Darker THAN Dark. Not to be nitpicky, but more people might try to read your story if there's not a grammatical error in the actual title of the story.
7/19/2011 c3 RubinAmigo
Dean's reaction to Cas jerking off next to him was awesome. But dammit, why did Bobby have to call Cas right then?
I'm curious to find out more :)
Dean's reaction to Cas jerking off next to him was awesome. But dammit, why did Bobby have to call Cas right then?
I'm curious to find out more :)
7/18/2011 c2 bluetigre
Omg this is crazy! but the very very good crazy! lol omg they should just confess their love!
Omg this is crazy! but the very very good crazy! lol omg they should just confess their love!
7/12/2011 c2 RubinAmigo
I'm so glad you wrote more, the story is really good. And your writing is much better in this chapter :)
And now you HAVE to write more, there's so many questions. I need to know what happens next.
I'm so glad you wrote more, the story is really good. And your writing is much better in this chapter :)
And now you HAVE to write more, there's so many questions. I need to know what happens next.
7/12/2011 c2 RhianKristen
Awww! You can't leave it there! I need more! Is she going to give him wings? Wing!Kink FTW! And finally, something with God in it - although I'm pretty sure Chuck was meant to be God in the series. Meh, it's God. Write more!
Awww! You can't leave it there! I need more! Is she going to give him wings? Wing!Kink FTW! And finally, something with God in it - although I'm pretty sure Chuck was meant to be God in the series. Meh, it's God. Write more!