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8/20/2011 c19 5blackunicorn16
for chapter 20, i meant, 'I heart on the you guys' it just won't show up on the computer
8/20/2011 c20 blackunicorn16
meant to say 'I3 you guys', but it came out wrong on the computer, sorry about that!

-BlackUnicorn16
8/15/2011 c18 5renny writes
Yaaaaaaaay! You're back! :D Great chapter! I liked the part where Anakin's pants caught fire. Can't wait until the next chapter!
7/8/2011 c17 renny writes
WOW! GREAT CHAPTER! I can't wait for the next chapter!
7/5/2011 c16 renny writes
Okay. That was a funny chapter! I cant wait until the next chapter!
7/5/2011 c15 renny writes
Nice chapter! I can't wait till the next one! :)
7/4/2011 c13 4Cut Productions
Hi! I like this story only it only takes about 1 minute to read a whole chapter. So, I think anyone who reads this would appreciate it if you made each chapter at least 2 scenes instead of 1 or 1/2 of one scene. Oh, and you keep spelling the word 'Ahsoka' wrong. You spell it lik, 'Ashoka' when it should be 'Ahsoka'. Anyways, like this story, how far away is this from episode 3? I would like to know that. Keep writing.-Maracta of Cut Productions
7/2/2011 c14 5blackunicorn16
Hello my fans, there is something wrong with my computer, and I can't upload Chapter 15. It will be up shortly though.

- Black Unicorn
7/2/2011 c14 5renny writes
Yeeeeeeeeah! Greedo is involved! Also, I didn't even notice you were spelling Ahsoka wrong! :O But either way, you've been doing a great job! Keep it up! :)
7/2/2011 c14 101Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay
Greedo is such a loser, he deserved to get beat up by Anakin and years later by Baron Papanida (I spelled that wrong!), and later shot by Han.
7/2/2011 c13 Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay
Sorry for not getting back to you sooner, I was in Dreamland.

Things are really heating up it seems.

I saw only one missed spelled word and it's Ahsoka, not Ashoka.
7/1/2011 c11 5renny writes
A little short, but I liked it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
7/1/2011 c9 renny writes
OMG! I really like it! Kepp it going! I can't wait for the next chapter!
7/1/2011 c10 101Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay
Uh oh!
7/1/2011 c9 Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay
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