for Brave New World12/25/2024 c1 Pat9921
why is it always the good writers that abandon works and not rhe shitty ones?! WHY?
why is it always the good writers that abandon works and not rhe shitty ones?! WHY?
6/29/2022 c1 Denise
This was really cool! Thanks!
This was really cool! Thanks!
9/6/2021 c1 Guest323
When can I read more of this? Or is it being posted elsewhere? It's a really appealing start.
When can I read more of this? Or is it being posted elsewhere? It's a really appealing start.
5/15/2021 c1 
11Codename-SN
Oh? my? god? Oh my God
Naruto doesn't know about his father then and it's already so bad when he doesn't i can't imaginé how worse it'd have felt knowing
11Codename-SNOh? my? god? Oh my God
Naruto doesn't know about his father then and it's already so bad when he doesn't i can't imaginé how worse it'd have felt knowing
5/12/2021 c1 Ai-chan
Aw man this waas awesome! I'd love to see more, but thanks for sharing what we got. :)
Hey if ur still writing in some capacity would u share it on ur profile? I'd love to read more from you!
Hope ur still out there doing well. :)
Stay safe.
Aw man this waas awesome! I'd love to see more, but thanks for sharing what we got. :)
Hey if ur still writing in some capacity would u share it on ur profile? I'd love to read more from you!
Hope ur still out there doing well. :)
Stay safe.
6/28/2020 c1 xcandiedoll
aww this looks so promising! very well written. i wish this was continued T_T
aww this looks so promising! very well written. i wish this was continued T_T
4/6/2020 c1 The ChocoGoat
Ah excuse me the rest please. You set it up so we'll, granted what would step two even be since in this case Naruto is in his right mind but you're such a great writer I can't help but want more
Ah excuse me the rest please. You set it up so we'll, granted what would step two even be since in this case Naruto is in his right mind but you're such a great writer I can't help but want more
8/24/2019 c1 Guest
Is this fanfic dead?
Is this fanfic dead?
12/29/2018 c1 2Kat1132
This is so sad. The last two paragraphs nearly have me in tears. Amazing work. I don't normally get so emotional in such a short amount of time, but it's something the best of writing can bring out of me. I'm disheartened that you haven't continued this, because I know there's a fantastic story here waiting to be told, but I'm willing to be patient to wait for it. What you already have is awesome. I can't wait to read what else you have in store.
Having read all of your works, I can honestly tell you that you are immensely talented. Thank you for sharing your work with us. If there is another venue where I can read more of your words (even one not involving Naruto) please let me know. I would be happy to read whatever you produce.
2Kat1132This is so sad. The last two paragraphs nearly have me in tears. Amazing work. I don't normally get so emotional in such a short amount of time, but it's something the best of writing can bring out of me. I'm disheartened that you haven't continued this, because I know there's a fantastic story here waiting to be told, but I'm willing to be patient to wait for it. What you already have is awesome. I can't wait to read what else you have in store.
Having read all of your works, I can honestly tell you that you are immensely talented. Thank you for sharing your work with us. If there is another venue where I can read more of your words (even one not involving Naruto) please let me know. I would be happy to read whatever you produce.