for Revolution X7/5/2011 c4 
2fantasyfan1999
Good chapter. And I think Concussion is a much better name than Cyclopes. Just throwing that out there. And Wanda is almost as big as Pietro, so why didn't she go? Maybe Sean stopped her. Good Luck!
2fantasyfan1999Good chapter. And I think Concussion is a much better name than Cyclopes. Just throwing that out there. And Wanda is almost as big as Pietro, so why didn't she go? Maybe Sean stopped her. Good Luck!
7/2/2011 c3 fantasyfan1999
Great story! The prologue confused me some, but I get it now. Wasn't Siryn pared with Multiple Man in the comics? The X-men are going to rescue Xavier, obviously. But were is the Brotherhood? Besides Quicksilver and the Scarlet Witch of course. And I like X-men Evolution too. It's my favorite cartoon and my second favorite show.
Great story! The prologue confused me some, but I get it now. Wasn't Siryn pared with Multiple Man in the comics? The X-men are going to rescue Xavier, obviously. But were is the Brotherhood? Besides Quicksilver and the Scarlet Witch of course. And I like X-men Evolution too. It's my favorite cartoon and my second favorite show.
7/1/2011 c1 Greenkidx
This is strange and rushed in my opinion. Feels like your trying to be shocking. I personally don't care to ever read any more of this story.
Best of Luck.
This is strange and rushed in my opinion. Feels like your trying to be shocking. I personally don't care to ever read any more of this story.
Best of Luck.
7/1/2011 c1 Raven Hearst
Intense! Hope to read more soon!
Intense! Hope to read more soon!