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3/6/2019 c5 130Loads of Randomness
Yay for progress!
3/6/2019 c4 Loads of Randomness
Oh intriguing
3/6/2019 c3 Loads of Randomness
Very sweet and touching
3/6/2019 c2 Loads of Randomness
Very sweet chapter. Glad you're letting Called play out his feelings
3/6/2019 c1 Loads of Randomness
Off to a good start!
11/25/2018 c54 31TwilightPony21
Finally made it to the end! So glad you came back to finish this story! While I think that the last chapter would have been a wonderful ending (as you brought Callen's whole story full circle), I think this epilogue gives closure to the story, too. Thanks for turning rare Callen/Kensi moments into a whole series of stories with such great OCs. Wish you the best with your future stories!
11/24/2018 c51 TwilightPony21
Aww, I can just picture the look on Hetty's face while meeting an angel. And I love that Lily told her father to go make Hetty some tea!
11/23/2018 c50 TwilightPony21
Wow, this episode feels like *so* long ago, but it was definitely a memorable one. I always liked the mystery of Callen's past - I was sort of sad that they've started to solve it in recent seasons.
11/23/2018 c47 TwilightPony21
Ah, the very beginning of the Nell and Eric ship! :)
11/23/2018 c45 TwilightPony21
Hi LostForeverInHisEyes! I can't believe that I'm just getting back to reading Moving On - you're right, it's like stepping back into another world! While I find it hard to still ship Callen and Kensi after the way the show went, I think you did a really nice job of writing a wedding with the supernatural component. I think your scenes with Lily were great. And I'm laughing about Deeks dancing with Hetty - would still love to see that on the show. Hope you're well and that your writing is going well - have a nice day!
7/20/2018 c54 11countrygirluk56
If anything could make me happy after the end of this wonderful story, it's the even better Living Epilogue. I love how you described Michael's life in a few paragraphs and his relationship with his angels. Did Callen and Kensi get to see their great grandchildren? Loved the fact that he was in law enforcement/undercover work (NCIS?) like his parents. Loved how he met Gen - I see touches of Callen in there. Would love to read more of his adventures either as a young boy with his parents and angels or as an agent with his retired parents and angels. Just a thought. Thank you for thinking me on a wonderful roller coaster ride of an excellent story. :-)
7/19/2018 c54 9Navyfan
Oh my ... Do you wanna let me choke on my tears? How can you write such an emotional chapter. I'm so greatful to read a good ending with the right amount of emotions and family and angels! But on the other side I'm so sad that the story is finished. I really like the Callen/Kensi thing and that is so rare because everyone is loving Densi. I'm so happy that you decided to finish this story no matter what. And I don't know how you found the idea of the angels but it was a very good decision! I love the thought of little Callen having a big sister! That is so incredibly sweet. I loved Alex because she seemed to be there for Callen and for Kensi every time they needed her. It was just perfect. Thanks ,thanks and again thanks for this perfect story! Have fun writing new storys and have a great week! 3
Navyfan
7/19/2018 c54 6ssl71
Excellent epilogue.
7/19/2018 c53 11countrygirluk56
Oh my that was awesome and something I didn't see coming. I thought that Alex would be able to save him, like she and James had done in the car but not like that. It was so heartbreaking for Callen to have to go through the pain again but of course there's light at the end of the tunnel because Alex is still his guardian angel and Kensi's pregnant. Perfect - I really don't know how you're going to top that!
Beautifully written my friend. :-)
7/18/2018 c53 28knirbenrots
This made me cry - it’s written with so much love that it hurt. Next to that simple fact you chose (and were able to use) so many words and senteces that are touching, loving ánd sad at the same time,
Bravo!
Thank you, once again,
Richtsje
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