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7/4/2011 c1 3battousai222
an interesting story idea, I look forward to seeing more in the near future! Just one hope, and thats that Kal-el will find his parents cubic box thing sooner rather than later and learn about his real parents and his home technology and all that comes with it. Hope to see more in the future for sure no matter what.

Do look forward to seeing all that this story has to hold, spesially with your previous pieces you've written, they were gold mones, so this one might be to!


PEACE and good luck on this new plot and story!
7/3/2011 c1 2Madge58
I really like the start. Interested in seeing how this turns out. Please update soon!
7/3/2011 c1 28Kairan1979
That's interesting to write - complete rewrite of Kal-El's childhood. Instersting to see arrogant Kal-El with potty mouth and hatred towards his biological parents for "abandoning" him.

When I heard the words "bounty hunter", I was thinking about Lobo. Thanks for not disappointing me.

Since you mentioned Green Lantern Corps, are you planning to include one of them in your story?
7/3/2011 c1 Spaniard
This looks amazing already.

Can't wait for more
7/2/2011 c1 Supabec
hey great start on the story

the bounty hunter superman cool

cant wait 4 the next update

update soon thanx
7/2/2011 c1 10unoaranya30
Love it.

You did a great job showing the Jor-El and Lara's fears and desperate hope in sending away their little baby in hopes of giving him a chance to live.

the bounty hunters were a very cool creation. Having rough hard individuals raise Little Kal-El was a cool twist. So Kal grew up on the wrong side of the universe and developed an arrogant attitude and maybe developed his powers a little faster due to two yellow suns. while his rough and tough parents became softer and more loving because of him. beautifully contrast there.

You gave us sadness and loss and hope and love and betrayal and friendship and humor all in one chapter!

can't wait to see what you have next!
7/2/2011 c1 phyrephly
This is going to be a good one, if this chapt is anything to go by. Such a radical re-write of Kal's beginnings (great premise, btw Ben ;])and yes..well..this Kal does have a potty mouth, but, as has been said before, I'm sure a certain Amazon princess will help him see things in a different light, in due course. I can see this one being a 50, on 60 parter LOLOL...maybe...;}, anyways, update soon, A
7/2/2011 c1 61ben10987654321
Wonderful start Arcadia. Nice you found Kal semi-decent parents but i guess he has to have at least some sense of honour and decency or Diana wouldn't find anything redeemable in him. Although i get a feeling she won't approve of his potty mouth.

Yep beating Lobo up. That's how you earn his respect.

Kal's parents bite the dust and knowing Darkseid it was a deliberate act to fill Kal up with hate and a thirst for vengeance. He is a scheming manipulative so and so.

I look forward to Kal clashing with the JL. That'll be entertaining.

Great opening chapter Arcadia. Update soon!
7/1/2011 c1 john777
interesting, keep writing
7/1/2011 c1 Nightwing 509
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you told how Superman became a bounty hunter. Please update soon.
7/1/2011 c1 16HELLACRE13
Very cool start A.

Interesting to see how Kal would be raised by Bounty Hunters and you know we should thank Dirk and Saki for keeping this kid. So he's got a potty mouth but I bet it's a cute mouth :)...and I daresay a certain princess is going to not be too pleased when he swears and cusses around

I thought Granny was going to get him for a minute.

Nice to see he can get some respect out of Lobo.

Damn that Letroi. Now they've killed Kal's parents and Apokolips wants him.

I wonder if kal even knows what he is about to face?

Update soon!
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