
11/23/2012 c1
14Wondo
I just came across "Jealousy". Excellent dialogue.
I like how you portrayed the way these two men dance around each other.
Peter knows Neal was probing for answers; he just won't provide him any material.
Very nice.

I just came across "Jealousy". Excellent dialogue.
I like how you portrayed the way these two men dance around each other.
Peter knows Neal was probing for answers; he just won't provide him any material.
Very nice.
11/9/2012 c1 wotumba1
don't think neal's being jealous here, more likely he wants to find out what's going on...
but it's good for him that peter thinks he's jealous...
don't think neal's being jealous here, more likely he wants to find out what's going on...
but it's good for him that peter thinks he's jealous...
8/4/2012 c1
10Bonkers4Reid
Great fic! I wanted to sample your work, but everything else is completed multi-chapters. Love how it's just intense, competitive dialogue.

Great fic! I wanted to sample your work, but everything else is completed multi-chapters. Love how it's just intense, competitive dialogue.
7/26/2011 c1
7AliWC
Yup, this conversation is exactly why Neal never confronted Peter about that agent in canon. He knew Peter would beat him.
Absolutely fabulous portrayal!

Yup, this conversation is exactly why Neal never confronted Peter about that agent in canon. He knew Peter would beat him.
Absolutely fabulous portrayal!
7/18/2011 c1
4canadianscanget
Tense. Loved the last few lines. Nice to see a good balance between Peter and Neal. Whether collaborating on trying to figure the other out they are both intelligent and respectful of each others abiliTies. CCG

Tense. Loved the last few lines. Nice to see a good balance between Peter and Neal. Whether collaborating on trying to figure the other out they are both intelligent and respectful of each others abiliTies. CCG
7/4/2011 c1
13last1stnding
This is good. Peter has definitely had Neal's number this season and you bring it out very well. Nicely done.

This is good. Peter has definitely had Neal's number this season and you bring it out very well. Nicely done.