for The Man Behind the Cut10/5/2013 c17 yellow
I thought you explain what a cut was in one of the chapter when sasuke was worried that sakura called it a vest and he corrected her
I thought you explain what a cut was in one of the chapter when sasuke was worried that sakura called it a vest and he corrected her
10/5/2013 c17 BookLover
Love it and Update soon I want to see Ren POV and put the dinner in the next chapter. Again love it and Please let Sakura and Sasuke have sex.
Love it and Update soon I want to see Ren POV and put the dinner in the next chapter. Again love it and Please let Sakura and Sasuke have sex.
10/5/2013 c17 
10SasuSaku993
yeah new chapter! I've been waiting awhile. Haha I can just imagine Sakura smacking someone with a spatula particularly Naruto. You gave me a near heart attack with the whole let's drop Sasuke in the pool thing. I thought something bad was about to happen. I was serious,y freaking out! Can't wait for the next chapter but I will! That's kind of stupid. the whole language think? I may not be familiar with the words but I still know the difference between a typo and a word that's supposed to be there.
-SasuSaku993 Out-
10SasuSaku993yeah new chapter! I've been waiting awhile. Haha I can just imagine Sakura smacking someone with a spatula particularly Naruto. You gave me a near heart attack with the whole let's drop Sasuke in the pool thing. I thought something bad was about to happen. I was serious,y freaking out! Can't wait for the next chapter but I will! That's kind of stupid. the whole language think? I may not be familiar with the words but I still know the difference between a typo and a word that's supposed to be there.
-SasuSaku993 Out-
10/5/2013 c5 Guest
AHHH! It's biker lingo! Thank goodness you explained it! Geez, next time, list the weird vocabulary.
AHHH! It's biker lingo! Thank goodness you explained it! Geez, next time, list the weird vocabulary.
10/5/2013 c4 Guest
Ok, have you seriously mixed up the words "coat" and "cut," or am I missing something? I'm going to guess English is not your first language, because the story's not bad so far, but...either way, that is a very sloppy mistake. It's even in the story's title. Please go back and fix it-for your reputation as a writer, if nothing else.
Ok, have you seriously mixed up the words "coat" and "cut," or am I missing something? I'm going to guess English is not your first language, because the story's not bad so far, but...either way, that is a very sloppy mistake. It's even in the story's title. Please go back and fix it-for your reputation as a writer, if nothing else.
10/5/2013 c17 Guest
Love it. Please do continue! Aiden is so adorable
Love it. Please do continue! Aiden is so adorable
10/5/2013 c17 12c00l4mfsch00l
Really good chapter! Love this story. Hope you're okay, you seem a little down. Anyways, keep up the good work, looking forward to your next update!
12c00l4mfsch00lReally good chapter! Love this story. Hope you're okay, you seem a little down. Anyways, keep up the good work, looking forward to your next update!
9/25/2013 c16 Blanche K
This story has been nothing short of amazing! I really do love the story line and idea! And I can't wait to see how everything will turnout! Please continue and update soon! Thanks
-Bianca K XD
This story has been nothing short of amazing! I really do love the story line and idea! And I can't wait to see how everything will turnout! Please continue and update soon! Thanks
-Bianca K XD
9/25/2013 c16 Makana
This is really good :D
This is really good :D
9/19/2013 c16 Chulis
Omg, I love it. Great work. Can't wait for the next chapters and the following chapters as well.
Omg, I love it. Great work. Can't wait for the next chapters and the following chapters as well.
9/15/2013 c14 Loving reader
seriously... UPDATE asap I have to know whats happening! love this
seriously... UPDATE asap I have to know whats happening! love this
9/3/2013 c9 10SasuSaku993
I never get tired of reading your story it so good. I hope you update soon. I've been anxiously waiting to see what you throw in next. I'm soo worried for Sasuke! What will happen to him without his heart medicine? I hope something good happens soon.
10SasuSaku993I never get tired of reading your story it so good. I hope you update soon. I've been anxiously waiting to see what you throw in next. I'm soo worried for Sasuke! What will happen to him without his heart medicine? I hope something good happens soon.