for Unintentional7/29/2011 c1 
16missthang06
A) I love Spencer and Wren
B) I like your writing style. It flowed nicely, and conveyed a lot...two important qualities
C) I think you have great potential in following this chapter with a second.
D) Perhaps I'm new to this whole drabble thing (I just started writing them and I rarely read them) but since you have labeled this as "complete" I'm assuming this is meant to be a one-shot, and I just don't think the ending works here. The ending raises questions for the reader, like why is Wren suddenly there and back in her life? How does Spencer feel about this? Etc. And I usually don't think one shots are meant to leave a reader wondering. They start, they end, the reader enjoys it but they can move on without anagonizing over what happens next, which I don't think is conveyed here. But that could just be my interpretation. Or if you intend to follow up and just mislabeled it, as stated, this has great potential and I'm excited for more.
E)Overall good job
16missthang06A) I love Spencer and Wren
B) I like your writing style. It flowed nicely, and conveyed a lot...two important qualities
C) I think you have great potential in following this chapter with a second.
D) Perhaps I'm new to this whole drabble thing (I just started writing them and I rarely read them) but since you have labeled this as "complete" I'm assuming this is meant to be a one-shot, and I just don't think the ending works here. The ending raises questions for the reader, like why is Wren suddenly there and back in her life? How does Spencer feel about this? Etc. And I usually don't think one shots are meant to leave a reader wondering. They start, they end, the reader enjoys it but they can move on without anagonizing over what happens next, which I don't think is conveyed here. But that could just be my interpretation. Or if you intend to follow up and just mislabeled it, as stated, this has great potential and I'm excited for more.
E)Overall good job
7/4/2011 c1 SpencerFan
Well, you broke up Soby so that alone earned you points with me in the story, do not like the couple at all as a romance - okay with friendship, but as far as romance goes there's only two people I think fit Spencer well enough so far and that's Wren and Emily! And since this is a Wrencer story - add another point for yourself there. :) It's a start you have going for yourself here, I hope you'll continue it; I look forward to seeing how this story advances - there just aren't enough Wren/Spencer stories going around out there and this could be such a good couple if we ever got to see their full potential on the show. :) Nice job, I look forward to reading more out of this pairing from you. :)
Well, you broke up Soby so that alone earned you points with me in the story, do not like the couple at all as a romance - okay with friendship, but as far as romance goes there's only two people I think fit Spencer well enough so far and that's Wren and Emily! And since this is a Wrencer story - add another point for yourself there. :) It's a start you have going for yourself here, I hope you'll continue it; I look forward to seeing how this story advances - there just aren't enough Wren/Spencer stories going around out there and this could be such a good couple if we ever got to see their full potential on the show. :) Nice job, I look forward to reading more out of this pairing from you. :)