
9/26/2024 c2 Jose19
Youirichi in terms of money doesn’t have to borrow money she comes from a prestigious Noble Clan.
Youirichi in terms of money doesn’t have to borrow money she comes from a prestigious Noble Clan.
10/27/2023 c6
8Hikari-J
I would like to present you with my sincère condoléances…
You bring enjoyment to many readers, and that’s something to be proud of, and I’m sure they would be too

I would like to present you with my sincère condoléances…
You bring enjoyment to many readers, and that’s something to be proud of, and I’m sure they would be too
2/9/2023 c6
5Hinata No Kitsune
Please update this story I would love to see how it turns out especially when Naruto meets his mother

Please update this story I would love to see how it turns out especially when Naruto meets his mother
6/22/2022 c5 TravelerPeace
Hi pretty pleased updated, everyone's interested Naruto even the head captain and I wanted Naruto to meet his dad too.
Hi pretty pleased updated, everyone's interested Naruto even the head captain and I wanted Naruto to meet his dad too.
6/3/2022 c3 Ryu wolf
Is omaeda, tetsuzemon and rangiku talking about kushina? Will naruto get to meet his birth mother
Is omaeda, tetsuzemon and rangiku talking about kushina? Will naruto get to meet his birth mother
1/13/2022 c6 guest
again, another good story that is discounted/ hiatus. Love the incorporation of Naruto into this. The relationship with Yoruichi as his mother is so wholesome
again, another good story that is discounted/ hiatus. Love the incorporation of Naruto into this. The relationship with Yoruichi as his mother is so wholesome
4/15/2021 c5 Guest
naruto technique heaven judgment is like sasuke lighting technique when he fight itachi
naruto technique heaven judgment is like sasuke lighting technique when he fight itachi
1/25/2021 c4 Maxlemore
Overall I find it is a nice story, what I don't like is your mc saying something but doing the opposite. Like when he tells kushina that he won't underestimate her anymore but doesn't even release his shikai. There's no reason to hold back in the first place and prolong the fight, that's actually something I never liked about bleach. Why not simply finish the fight before your enemy unseals his power, everything else is just gambling with your own life and the life of your friends.
Overall I find it is a nice story, what I don't like is your mc saying something but doing the opposite. Like when he tells kushina that he won't underestimate her anymore but doesn't even release his shikai. There's no reason to hold back in the first place and prolong the fight, that's actually something I never liked about bleach. Why not simply finish the fight before your enemy unseals his power, everything else is just gambling with your own life and the life of your friends.