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1Lucifer Helheim
Please update this story I would love to see how it turns out especially when Naruto meets his mother
1Lucifer HelheimPlease update this story I would love to see how it turns out especially when Naruto meets his mother
6/22/2022 c5 TravelerPeace
Hi pretty pleased updated, everyone's interested Naruto even the head captain and I wanted Naruto to meet his dad too.
Hi pretty pleased updated, everyone's interested Naruto even the head captain and I wanted Naruto to meet his dad too.
6/3/2022 c3 Ryu wolf
Is omaeda, tetsuzemon and rangiku talking about kushina? Will naruto get to meet his birth mother
Is omaeda, tetsuzemon and rangiku talking about kushina? Will naruto get to meet his birth mother
1/13/2022 c6 guest
again, another good story that is discounted/ hiatus. Love the incorporation of Naruto into this. The relationship with Yoruichi as his mother is so wholesome
again, another good story that is discounted/ hiatus. Love the incorporation of Naruto into this. The relationship with Yoruichi as his mother is so wholesome
4/15/2021 c5 Guest
naruto technique heaven judgment is like sasuke lighting technique when he fight itachi
naruto technique heaven judgment is like sasuke lighting technique when he fight itachi
1/25/2021 c4 Maxlemore
Overall I find it is a nice story, what I don't like is your mc saying something but doing the opposite. Like when he tells kushina that he won't underestimate her anymore but doesn't even release his shikai. There's no reason to hold back in the first place and prolong the fight, that's actually something I never liked about bleach. Why not simply finish the fight before your enemy unseals his power, everything else is just gambling with your own life and the life of your friends.
Overall I find it is a nice story, what I don't like is your mc saying something but doing the opposite. Like when he tells kushina that he won't underestimate her anymore but doesn't even release his shikai. There's no reason to hold back in the first place and prolong the fight, that's actually something I never liked about bleach. Why not simply finish the fight before your enemy unseals his power, everything else is just gambling with your own life and the life of your friends.
12/16/2020 c1 Guest
logically Beach is too confusing fo me to understand
logically Beach is too confusing fo me to understand
8/6/2020 c6 1RexNihil
I'm going to guess that Naruto's Bankai is the mixing of all three spirits to from the Storm God.
1RexNihilI'm going to guess that Naruto's Bankai is the mixing of all three spirits to from the Storm God.
7/22/2020 c6 Danirodriguez1995
Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched.
Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched.
5/14/2020 c6 5Planar-Walking-Entertainment
Here’s an interesting thought: what if this nanao guy, the one stuck in the imbetween, is the shinigami the Shinobi summon into their world via shiki fuin technique? Wonder if you plan on incorporating that into here or naruto’s inevitable return to the Shinobi world... would love to see that. Keep up the good work.
5Planar-Walking-EntertainmentHere’s an interesting thought: what if this nanao guy, the one stuck in the imbetween, is the shinigami the Shinobi summon into their world via shiki fuin technique? Wonder if you plan on incorporating that into here or naruto’s inevitable return to the Shinobi world... would love to see that. Keep up the good work.