
12/17/2015 c5 ivan0061509
Nice chapter it was really good i can't wait to read the next chapter you post
Nice chapter it was really good i can't wait to read the next chapter you post
10/16/2015 c5 axel
espero el siguiente capitulo
espero el siguiente capitulo
10/3/2015 c3
6Kinaki747
Isn't it naruto's last name that means maelstrom or whirlpool while his first name is short for narutomaki, a type of fishcake? He could also be named after the Naruto whirlpools, but since they do not exist in Narutoverse his name comes from the fishcake. It even says so on his page on Narutopedia. See ya. :)

Isn't it naruto's last name that means maelstrom or whirlpool while his first name is short for narutomaki, a type of fishcake? He could also be named after the Naruto whirlpools, but since they do not exist in Narutoverse his name comes from the fishcake. It even says so on his page on Narutopedia. See ya. :)
9/13/2015 c2 Kinaki747
Just curious, but will Naruto be OP in this story or immensely strong or gradually get immensely strong because I find a story with an OP character dull. There is no fun in a story with an OP character from the start and I find stories with adversity entertaining and intriguing. Also if this story is a harem can it be a small harem. I can't really stand big harems. Anyways hope you have a wonderful day sir or ma'am. :)
Just curious, but will Naruto be OP in this story or immensely strong or gradually get immensely strong because I find a story with an OP character dull. There is no fun in a story with an OP character from the start and I find stories with adversity entertaining and intriguing. Also if this story is a harem can it be a small harem. I can't really stand big harems. Anyways hope you have a wonderful day sir or ma'am. :)
9/13/2015 c5 Kinaki747
I'm curious, is Naruto going to have a harem in this story or is it a single pairing, or is he just flirting with the females? Also, interesting concept and plot for this story. :)
I'm curious, is Naruto going to have a harem in this story or is it a single pairing, or is he just flirting with the females? Also, interesting concept and plot for this story. :)
9/13/2015 c1 Kinaki747
Now this story seems very intriguing. n_n Not to nitpick or anything but I noticed that there are some misspelled words and a few grammar errors. Other than that this seems like an interesting story. See ya. :)
Now this story seems very intriguing. n_n Not to nitpick or anything but I noticed that there are some misspelled words and a few grammar errors. Other than that this seems like an interesting story. See ya. :)
8/27/2015 c5
3doubledamn
Will each of Naruto's Shikai's have an individual Bankai, and THEN a fourth form combing all three? Or just 3 Shikai and the Bankai is the fusion?

Will each of Naruto's Shikai's have an individual Bankai, and THEN a fourth form combing all three? Or just 3 Shikai and the Bankai is the fusion?
5/26/2015 c5 matthewdeal25
Please continue this story. At the very least have naruto meet his real parents and end the ryoka invasion arc
Please continue this story. At the very least have naruto meet his real parents and end the ryoka invasion arc
5/2/2015 c5 Amoknystrom
I have got to say this is hands down one of my favorite fics so far. I've read most of your fics and can't wait to see the next chapter. Hope to see it soon!
I have got to say this is hands down one of my favorite fics so far. I've read most of your fics and can't wait to see the next chapter. Hope to see it soon!