for Arms5/14/2023 c4 VryUnique
Bella spilled some secrets.
Edward needs to keep his hands to himself.
I don’t like that he thinks she is 17.
Bella spilled some secrets.
Edward needs to keep his hands to himself.
I don’t like that he thinks she is 17.
5/14/2023 c3 VryUnique
I so wanted them to tell Edward her real age but I’m sure that would have caused him to have more questions. I could feel Bella’s annoyance at be treated like a child for having a beer. I wonder how they are going to explain leaving Bella’s car behind. Her drinking is the only reason I can think of that would make sense.
I so wanted them to tell Edward her real age but I’m sure that would have caused him to have more questions. I could feel Bella’s annoyance at be treated like a child for having a beer. I wonder how they are going to explain leaving Bella’s car behind. Her drinking is the only reason I can think of that would make sense.
5/13/2023 c2 VryUnique
I guess there isn’t anything wrong with Bella being fluent in guns at her age, courtesy of her father but it’s probably too close to her actual life to reveal.
I’m glad the Cullens aren’t totally clueless where Bella is concerned.
I guess there isn’t anything wrong with Bella being fluent in guns at her age, courtesy of her father but it’s probably too close to her actual life to reveal.
I’m glad the Cullens aren’t totally clueless where Bella is concerned.
5/13/2023 c1 VryUnique
Poor Bella, to loose everything like that is just awful. I don’t like the fact that they put her with an unsuspecting family, they are in danger and don’t even know it.
I’m hoping Edward doesn’t cross any lines since she is seventeen.
This reminded me of never been kissed with Drew Barrymore.
Poor Bella, to loose everything like that is just awful. I don’t like the fact that they put her with an unsuspecting family, they are in danger and don’t even know it.
I’m hoping Edward doesn’t cross any lines since she is seventeen.
This reminded me of never been kissed with Drew Barrymore.
5/8/2023 c3 EdwardsVampTramp
'Foster-brother, I scream to myself. Foster-brother, foster-brother, foster-brother!'
Bwahahaha!
'Foster-brother, I scream to myself. Foster-brother, foster-brother, foster-brother!'
Bwahahaha!
5/8/2023 c1 EdwardsVampTramp
I just found this on TwiFanfictionrecs and am really digging it! It sort of has that "Never Been Kissed" vibe, only darker. ;)
I just found this on TwiFanfictionrecs and am really digging it! It sort of has that "Never Been Kissed" vibe, only darker. ;)
5/8/2023 c26 Rita01tx
I can well imagine what a mind-f*ck it was for Edward and Bella...I mean, Masen and Leia *lol* to hear that they can now, after 10 years, safely see Edward's family again! After all this time, that would be one helluva adjustment for all concerned but how could they resist? Can't wait to see the big reunion!
I can well imagine what a mind-f*ck it was for Edward and Bella...I mean, Masen and Leia *lol* to hear that they can now, after 10 years, safely see Edward's family again! After all this time, that would be one helluva adjustment for all concerned but how could they resist? Can't wait to see the big reunion!
4/12/2023 c26 twiclare
I can understand why they don’t want to just rush back, but I love that they can see the family again. It’s going to be overwhelming!
I can understand why they don’t want to just rush back, but I love that they can see the family again. It’s going to be overwhelming!
4/10/2023 c26 marigold123
I just found your story and read through over the weekend. I’ve enjoyed reading it. I think you’ve brought Bella and Edward’s emotions through clearly and you kept me in suspense while they were separated. I think Leia and Mason are going through a lot. They may have their family back. Looking forward to more Eli’s! Thank you for sharing.
I just found your story and read through over the weekend. I’ve enjoyed reading it. I think you’ve brought Bella and Edward’s emotions through clearly and you kept me in suspense while they were separated. I think Leia and Mason are going through a lot. They may have their family back. Looking forward to more Eli’s! Thank you for sharing.
2