for Arms9/24/2018 c5 RoryCullen
I knew Edward would be glad to hear that piece of news but what about the fact she has to leave again? I wonder will Edward take a leave of absence and go with her? I was wondering why an Olympic Gold medalist would be out in the public without a disguise. Someone recognizing her was a serious possibility. I know her sport is not followed as closely with fans as let’s say swimming, or hockey but still... I think they should call Emmett and have him come over to help protect Bella. I don’t know why they are waiting until the morning to “possibly” relocate Bella.
I knew Edward would be glad to hear that piece of news but what about the fact she has to leave again? I wonder will Edward take a leave of absence and go with her? I was wondering why an Olympic Gold medalist would be out in the public without a disguise. Someone recognizing her was a serious possibility. I know her sport is not followed as closely with fans as let’s say swimming, or hockey but still... I think they should call Emmett and have him come over to help protect Bella. I don’t know why they are waiting until the morning to “possibly” relocate Bella.
9/24/2018 c4 RoryCullen
Well how about that, Edward acted like a big brother there with her after all. Or at least I wasn’t picking up on any sexual tension this time, unlike the last time he hugged her.
Well how about that, Edward acted like a big brother there with her after all. Or at least I wasn’t picking up on any sexual tension this time, unlike the last time he hugged her.
9/24/2018 c3 RoryCullen
I thought that might happen, Edward walking in on them. It’s really too bad Bella can’t tell him her real age. I wonder how they will be able to keep it a secret when Emmett arrives? Edward’s jealously was really sweet. I must say Bella’s reactions to Jasper and Edward make her seem every bit the 17 year old she is pretending to be.
I thought that might happen, Edward walking in on them. It’s really too bad Bella can’t tell him her real age. I wonder how they will be able to keep it a secret when Emmett arrives? Edward’s jealously was really sweet. I must say Bella’s reactions to Jasper and Edward make her seem every bit the 17 year old she is pretending to be.
9/24/2018 c2 RoryCullen
This chapter made me cry when Bella was talking with Edward about missing her parents. It made me feel a tinge of fear when she realized she can’t rely on her hobby/sport to help her release her frustrations and she is going to have to remain there living this false identity indefinitely with no one she can talk the truth to after Jasper leaves. So Jasper wants to see her in Port Angeles?
This chapter made me cry when Bella was talking with Edward about missing her parents. It made me feel a tinge of fear when she realized she can’t rely on her hobby/sport to help her release her frustrations and she is going to have to remain there living this false identity indefinitely with no one she can talk the truth to after Jasper leaves. So Jasper wants to see her in Port Angeles?
9/24/2018 c1 RoryCullen
This story reminds me of Drew Barrymore’s role in the movie, “First Kiss”, when she had to go back to high school mascarading as a high school student. Her teacher-crush was possibly just as handsome as Edward...well almost. Your story is off to a great start. Love how you get right to the main focus of the interaction right in the first chapter. I’m sure I’m going to love this story. Thanks.
This story reminds me of Drew Barrymore’s role in the movie, “First Kiss”, when she had to go back to high school mascarading as a high school student. Her teacher-crush was possibly just as handsome as Edward...well almost. Your story is off to a great start. Love how you get right to the main focus of the interaction right in the first chapter. I’m sure I’m going to love this story. Thanks.
9/23/2018 c24 WiltshireGlo
That was lovely. So much lovely! Thank you.
This story has stayed with me, no matter what I’ve read or how long it’s been. I’m so grateful that you gave us more. Much love xo
That was lovely. So much lovely! Thank you.
This story has stayed with me, no matter what I’ve read or how long it’s been. I’m so grateful that you gave us more. Much love xo
119/13/2018 c6 Guest
I can't imagine that Jasper will let her stay.
I can't imagine that Jasper will let her stay.
9/12/2018 c5 Guest
She's 23!
She's 23!
9/12/2018 c4 Guest
Yikes! That was a huge breach to her witness protection. Riley was not in his rights to give an account of her whereabouts.
Yikes! That was a huge breach to her witness protection. Riley was not in his rights to give an account of her whereabouts.
9/12/2018 c3 Guest
Edward was so jealous! If he only knew she is 23.
Edward was so jealous! If he only knew she is 23.
9/12/2018 c2 Guest
Jasper?
Jasper?
9/12/2018 c1 Guest
Saw this recommended on TLS. Looks good!
Saw this recommended on TLS. Looks good!
9/10/2018 c24 caution-sign
Shit, this story was hot and beautiful and angry all in one. It was wonderful, especially seeing them grow and knowing that Bella's placement as who and where she was wouldn't be forever. It was such a good story, thank you for writing for us.
Shit, this story was hot and beautiful and angry all in one. It was wonderful, especially seeing them grow and knowing that Bella's placement as who and where she was wouldn't be forever. It was such a good story, thank you for writing for us.