for The hero and his fair maiden10/29/2011 c1 
17Hellzz-on-Earth
Loved it. Always like reading AU and especially where Chlollie are the main characters.
Thanks for sharing.
17Hellzz-on-EarthLoved it. Always like reading AU and especially where Chlollie are the main characters.
Thanks for sharing.
7/15/2011 c1 21luminare91
Sorry it took me so long to get to this. My life has been crazy of late. Anyway, this was unbelievably cute. It's a very nice prelude to their relationship. My only bit of advice would be that especially the dialogue seems a little grown up for the ages of the characters. I don't see a seven year old saying "no fair maiden," even if he is obsessed with Robin Hood, as well know Oliver is.
That being said, you managed to capture their characters at such a young age, which is no easy feat. This is really well done for someone your age. When I was fifteen, I never could have managed it.
OH! And happy almost birthday!
21luminare91Sorry it took me so long to get to this. My life has been crazy of late. Anyway, this was unbelievably cute. It's a very nice prelude to their relationship. My only bit of advice would be that especially the dialogue seems a little grown up for the ages of the characters. I don't see a seven year old saying "no fair maiden," even if he is obsessed with Robin Hood, as well know Oliver is.
That being said, you managed to capture their characters at such a young age, which is no easy feat. This is really well done for someone your age. When I was fifteen, I never could have managed it.
OH! And happy almost birthday!
7/13/2011 c1 3kdrenai
Totally loved your story and would love it if you would continue it. I would love to see how their friendship develops. It was heartbreaking for poor Chloe.
3kdrenaiTotally loved your story and would love it if you would continue it. I would love to see how their friendship develops. It was heartbreaking for poor Chloe.
7/10/2011 c1 16Mark-Owen
The idea is great and a series of one-shot Chlollie is always welcomed but in this one, The characters seem much more older than 6 and 7, I would say they look like they're at least 14 or 15 by the way they act and talk.
16Mark-OwenThe idea is great and a series of one-shot Chlollie is always welcomed but in this one, The characters seem much more older than 6 and 7, I would say they look like they're at least 14 or 15 by the way they act and talk.
7/9/2011 c1 Jjjjjjj
Series! More mini chlollie
Series! More mini chlollie