for Spinning Out of Control12/3/2015 c2 
3adbhut
Wow! Their bond was so beautifully described. I love how kind and understanding Monica is. This story was very nice.
3adbhutWow! Their bond was so beautifully described. I love how kind and understanding Monica is. This story was very nice.
12/2/2015 c1 adbhut
Haha Michael is being Michael. Arrogant and brash. It was so cute on Kai's part to save Frankie and Luiz's beyblades. Loved it!
Haha Michael is being Michael. Arrogant and brash. It was so cute on Kai's part to save Frankie and Luiz's beyblades. Loved it!
9/28/2012 c3 56chocolatexloverx16
This is... this is... OMG. I didn't even KNOW this was updated! D':
And yet Aquila did, she's just epic at this part XD (Oh duh, the requesting part probs helped. heh.)
MYSTEL 8D No wonder she noticed this XD I should've noticed this too DDD8
Also, also, Bey Nazi LOL. Love the term :'D [He understood his will to win, but not to the point where he and the others were placed in harm's way for a cause they cared nothing about.] YAY Mystel, you tell it like it is! :D
[Injured if they went through with it or blackmailed and beaten if they refused, the big picture is cruel to them all. These thoughts flitted through Mystel's mind as he leapt from tree branch to tree branch, heading towards his save (safe?) haven - the park.] Yes, I agree, that is just too cruel D: You show them how you feel Mystel, and you keep leaping away! You're very good at leaping, so I think you'll get the point across, yes *nods*
[Reclining back, his gaze drifted to the sky, a place where the answers to his questions always seemed to appear.] CONSTELLATIONS? 8D Who knows, maybe the big dipper had an idea of how to dig up a plan for that evil (smexy) purple-haired Boris? XD
[All he wanted was to return to his carefree lifestyle, but that wasn't going to happen any time soon.] Nawwww, poor Mystel *pat pat* If I had his ability to fly like that, I'd wanna be freeeeee fallllllllin' all the time D:
["Here's to you, Boris." said the teen as he raised a finger to the air. "Looks like I'm having my own celebration."] DUDE, which finger? Is it... is it the middle finger? Also, a one-person celebration can't be all that bad-nobody can ruin it that way x3
Loved it :D (Also, can you tell I've been under Aquila's influence a while? I'm sure you can...)
chocolatexloverx16
56chocolatexloverx16This is... this is... OMG. I didn't even KNOW this was updated! D':
And yet Aquila did, she's just epic at this part XD (Oh duh, the requesting part probs helped. heh.)
MYSTEL 8D No wonder she noticed this XD I should've noticed this too DDD8
Also, also, Bey Nazi LOL. Love the term :'D [He understood his will to win, but not to the point where he and the others were placed in harm's way for a cause they cared nothing about.] YAY Mystel, you tell it like it is! :D
[Injured if they went through with it or blackmailed and beaten if they refused, the big picture is cruel to them all. These thoughts flitted through Mystel's mind as he leapt from tree branch to tree branch, heading towards his save (safe?) haven - the park.] Yes, I agree, that is just too cruel D: You show them how you feel Mystel, and you keep leaping away! You're very good at leaping, so I think you'll get the point across, yes *nods*
[Reclining back, his gaze drifted to the sky, a place where the answers to his questions always seemed to appear.] CONSTELLATIONS? 8D Who knows, maybe the big dipper had an idea of how to dig up a plan for that evil (smexy) purple-haired Boris? XD
[All he wanted was to return to his carefree lifestyle, but that wasn't going to happen any time soon.] Nawwww, poor Mystel *pat pat* If I had his ability to fly like that, I'd wanna be freeeeee fallllllllin' all the time D:
["Here's to you, Boris." said the teen as he raised a finger to the air. "Looks like I'm having my own celebration."] DUDE, which finger? Is it... is it the middle finger? Also, a one-person celebration can't be all that bad-nobody can ruin it that way x3
Loved it :D (Also, can you tell I've been under Aquila's influence a while? I'm sure you can...)
chocolatexloverx16
8/30/2012 c1 117Beywriter
Hi
Ah, a good song I enjoy myself! Good selection!
Great little fic there, snippet of life. Yay for first Beyblade fic!
I will read other chapters at a later date.
Beywriter
117BeywriterHi
Ah, a good song I enjoy myself! Good selection!
Great little fic there, snippet of life. Yay for first Beyblade fic!
I will read other chapters at a later date.
Beywriter
6/6/2012 c3 No Longer Active Here
Such an EPIC SONG :D
Thank you so much for doing this and with Mystel too :D
Good connection with the lyrics and I loved the ending.
Noticed you left the profanity part out ha ha, but still an epic piece!
Thanks again VADER :D
Aquila
Such an EPIC SONG :D
Thank you so much for doing this and with Mystel too :D
Good connection with the lyrics and I loved the ending.
Noticed you left the profanity part out ha ha, but still an epic piece!
Thanks again VADER :D
Aquila
3/17/2012 c2 No Longer Active Here
Haven't listened to the song myself, but I liked how it focused on Monica and Crusher.
Monica can read minds!
That was certainly a more 'depressing' scene.
Kudos to you.
Do you take requests? I have a song :D
~Aquila
Haven't listened to the song myself, but I liked how it focused on Monica and Crusher.
Monica can read minds!
That was certainly a more 'depressing' scene.
Kudos to you.
Do you take requests? I have a song :D
~Aquila
3/12/2012 c2 56chocolatexloverx16
Hey :)
GUESS WHO?
[A large man in a red coat sat by the building corner, tears streaming down his face.] T.T FMA has tainted my thinking, this made me think of Armstrong... *sigh*
["I'm here to help, Moses." she said with a smile. "I know you'll find a way to pay for my operation. I don't want to see you doing something dark and sinister for me."] I love her. I seriously do. She's so cute and nice and everything :')
["I'm your sister, silly. I know when something's bothering you." "But if I don't do this, I don't know how long it'll take for you to get your operation! Knowing you're in there, waiting for me, I can't help but feel pain."] Aww, poor Crusher D: I wanna give him a hug now D:
[Don't think about the pain, think about all the happy memories we have. You've always been good to me; I know you'll find a way to make things work, big brother."] Again, she's so damn cute 3
[... Nothing. Had she even been there at all or was his consciousness trying to fight the darkness clouding over him?] Hm... I have to go with... the latter! If it was me that wrote it, it probs would be the former option though :3
But seriously, siblings have awesome powers (of telepathy)!
And those powers shall not be underestimated...
chocolatexloverx16
56chocolatexloverx16Hey :)
GUESS WHO?
[A large man in a red coat sat by the building corner, tears streaming down his face.] T.T FMA has tainted my thinking, this made me think of Armstrong... *sigh*
["I'm here to help, Moses." she said with a smile. "I know you'll find a way to pay for my operation. I don't want to see you doing something dark and sinister for me."] I love her. I seriously do. She's so cute and nice and everything :')
["I'm your sister, silly. I know when something's bothering you." "But if I don't do this, I don't know how long it'll take for you to get your operation! Knowing you're in there, waiting for me, I can't help but feel pain."] Aww, poor Crusher D: I wanna give him a hug now D:
[Don't think about the pain, think about all the happy memories we have. You've always been good to me; I know you'll find a way to make things work, big brother."] Again, she's so damn cute 3
[... Nothing. Had she even been there at all or was his consciousness trying to fight the darkness clouding over him?] Hm... I have to go with... the latter! If it was me that wrote it, it probs would be the former option though :3
But seriously, siblings have awesome powers (of telepathy)!
And those powers shall not be underestimated...
chocolatexloverx16
2/24/2012 c2 17deadbynow
What a coincident! I was listening to Blow me Away just today and thinking about Kai and all the scenes of him battling with Brooklyn, Tyson and all kept playing all over in my head...I think the song is more sentimental than you portrayed, when it comes to Kai...but, meh. I applaud you for actually writing a drabble. I have never actually done that...;p
Keep it up...:D I'll be waiting.
17deadbynowWhat a coincident! I was listening to Blow me Away just today and thinking about Kai and all the scenes of him battling with Brooklyn, Tyson and all kept playing all over in my head...I think the song is more sentimental than you portrayed, when it comes to Kai...but, meh. I applaud you for actually writing a drabble. I have never actually done that...;p
Keep it up...:D I'll be waiting.
2/13/2012 c1 theDarkness
Guess who!
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE THIS?
Please update soon, yes?
Guess who!
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE THIS?
Please update soon, yes?
7/9/2011 c1 56chocolatexloverx16
Yo :3
DUDE. Ok, lucky for you, this won't be (very) long. I say unfortunately, because I know you like size :3
Ahem. Anyway. The title by itself sounds dirty x3 Did you play it today?
OMG, that sounds creepy/stalkerish D: Maybe not to you... but anyone else reading this...
Nice integration of the lyrics, btw :) [I am the shadow on the wall, I'll be the one to save us all. Kai sat crouched on the wall, watching Michael take on Frankie and Luiz of Spintensity.] Hehe :3 And, and, YAY, FRANKIE REFERENCE! You used it :D And now i remember the team name too :3 Win-win, man... win-win.
["Dranzer, attack!" Kai yelled, "Fire arrow!"] Wooooohooooo, Kai to the rescue, he shall save, well, Spintensity XD
And the way they reacted, well, i guess they listened really well too :3 Then again... hard not to listen to Kai x3
[Michael glared at him. "Why?" Kai shrugged. "I'm bored. And you want to fight."] Total lol-age :3 Hahahahahahaha, definitely could see Kai being all casual about it. "Oh yeah, I'm just bored, dude. I'm curing it is all." And Michael, lol. "Dude, piss off, this is MY FIGHT, bitch."
Well, Michael's would be first, but still :3
Not sure how well you'll understand this review, but i liked it love :3
chocolatexloverx16
56chocolatexloverx16Yo :3
DUDE. Ok, lucky for you, this won't be (very) long. I say unfortunately, because I know you like size :3
Ahem. Anyway. The title by itself sounds dirty x3 Did you play it today?
OMG, that sounds creepy/stalkerish D: Maybe not to you... but anyone else reading this...
Nice integration of the lyrics, btw :) [I am the shadow on the wall, I'll be the one to save us all. Kai sat crouched on the wall, watching Michael take on Frankie and Luiz of Spintensity.] Hehe :3 And, and, YAY, FRANKIE REFERENCE! You used it :D And now i remember the team name too :3 Win-win, man... win-win.
["Dranzer, attack!" Kai yelled, "Fire arrow!"] Wooooohooooo, Kai to the rescue, he shall save, well, Spintensity XD
And the way they reacted, well, i guess they listened really well too :3 Then again... hard not to listen to Kai x3
[Michael glared at him. "Why?" Kai shrugged. "I'm bored. And you want to fight."] Total lol-age :3 Hahahahahahaha, definitely could see Kai being all casual about it. "Oh yeah, I'm just bored, dude. I'm curing it is all." And Michael, lol. "Dude, piss off, this is MY FIGHT, bitch."
Well, Michael's would be first, but still :3
Not sure how well you'll understand this review, but i liked it love :3
chocolatexloverx16
7/9/2011 c1 No Longer Active Here
OMG!
You're first story for Beyblade!
This is so exciting!
Love the song - go Breaking Benjamin :D
You have done your research. I remember Spintensity.
GO MICHAEL! HE'S THE BOMB!
Good on Kai, snap at the other randoms.
Michael! *waves Michael fan banner in the air*
Gonna write more?
~Aquila
OMG!
You're first story for Beyblade!
This is so exciting!
Love the song - go Breaking Benjamin :D
You have done your research. I remember Spintensity.
GO MICHAEL! HE'S THE BOMB!
Good on Kai, snap at the other randoms.
Michael! *waves Michael fan banner in the air*
Gonna write more?
~Aquila