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11/18 c1 reader71360
So true. Hopefully Mike will go to prison, and get help.
11/1 c1 BELAVERA
How true. It is a serious thing and I hope Mike is severly punished for it.
9/7/2021 c1 brokenspirit21
I knew when I read this that it sounded familiar. Found this copy on Goodreads dated 2015

“I went to a party,
And remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, Mom
So I had a sprite instead.
I felt proud of myself,
The way you said I would,
That I didn't drink and drive,
Though some friends said I should.
I made a healthy choice,
And your advice to me was right,
The party finally ended,
And the kids drove out of sight.
I got into my car,
Sure to get home in one piece,
I never knew what was coming, Mom
Something I expected least.
Now I'm lying on the pavement,
And I hear the policeman say,
The kid that caused this wreck was drunk,
Mom, his voice seems far away.
My own blood's all around me,
As I try hard not to cry.
I can hear the paramedic say,
This girl is going to die.
I'm sure the guy had no idea,
While he was flying high,
Because he chose to drink and drive,
Now I would have to die.
So why do people do it, Mom
Knowing that it ruins lives?
And now the pain is cutting me,
Like a hundred stabbing knives.
Tell sister not to be afraid,
Tell daddy to be brave,
And when I go to heaven,
Put Daddy's Girl on my grave.
Someone should have taught him,
That its wrong to drink and drive.
Maybe if his parents had,
I'd still be alive.
My breath is getting shorter, Mom
I'm getting really scared.
These are my final moments,
And I'm so unprepared.
I wish that you could hold me Mom,
As I lie here and die.
I wish that I could say, "I love you, Mom!"
So I love you and good-bye.”
9/5/2021 c1 Lisa
Thank you for writing this very sad story.
6/7/2012 c1 7Cirruz
This is amazing! And what's sad, is this happens all the time. :( Great story/Poem! Amazing! Bravo!
10/13/2011 c1 Bookloverstar
Ohhhhh my god that is so true. Drinking and driving is wrong, but this fic is really sad but it's also really true. Good job!
7/24/2011 c1 Scarlett Maiden
wasn't it supposed to be mommy's girl and mommy instead of Edward either that or i saw something different before
7/24/2011 c1 Drithligh
Now I'm all teary eyed. It's a good point to make. Hope people read this.
7/18/2011 c1 Bananahsplit
Omg thats so sad! It was a creative song too:)
7/10/2011 c1 7Peaceandunity
Why wasn't edward at the party with her? That's the kind of thing her would usually drive her to and from.
7/10/2011 c1 7treena-ivy-carter
Awe that was sad.
7/9/2011 c1 11greedfxn
Awww! Love it!
7/9/2011 c1 16xXxhurting-insidexXx
Awwwwwwwwwwwwh! That Was Soo Good! :') .. Rilly Sad But Good : )) Favoriting Now!

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