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6/17/2012 c15 1belly84
matt is such a prick! very good chapter! can't wait to read more!

xxx

-belly
6/1/2012 c15 25afanoflife
I'm glad that you updated this story! I look forward to what will happen next.
12/15/2011 c11 4angel2u
poor james. his dad is so going to embarass him.
8/1/2011 c11 AddictedtoHPForever
UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
7/24/2011 c11 a fan
I like how you made Harry a professor...I would feel sorry for James right now.
7/21/2011 c11 2ArandoraStar
Oh no! You posted the same chapter twice on accident!
7/16/2011 c1 a fan
So...I got curious and decided to find the original story that you posted. I'm guessing it was the right one...same characters and everything. I read all 10 chapters and I loved it. I can't wait to see what you do with your reposting of it.
7/16/2011 c10 10SKewedViEW
This looks really good! I can't wait to see where it goes :)
7/15/2011 c2 emandem
This is such an origional idea! I love it so far :D
7/15/2011 c1 emandem
sounds cool :)
7/12/2011 c8 2SiriuslyKrazy81
Update soon! Can't wait for more! :))))
7/11/2011 c8 HPlover243
Hey! Love the fic so far! Cant wait to read more. Update soon!
7/11/2011 c3 3Quaternary
Okay, I like your story, you're very descriptive and explain a TON of stuff. But your formatting leaves a lot to be desires, huge walls of text are normally a faux pas committed by the eager, so I commend you for that, but try breaking those walls of text up into smaller, more manageable paragraphs. It makes your story a LOT easier on the eyes.

Another thing that you should look into is how much exposition you have in your first chapter. That wasn't a bad way to let us know (aside from the formatting) but Christine has a metric ton of history to her and telling the reader all of it at the start of the story isn't a good way to introduce us to the character. Studying for the SATs as an establishing character moment was great but really muddled with everything else you were telling us during the first chapter.

In the end, this is a great story that can go long. So make sure you stick to it, Germanviola.
7/11/2011 c8 Guest
Cool beans :):):)
7/10/2011 c2 Guest
I just wanted to clarify something, is this a James Potter (Marauder's Era), or James Sirius Potter (Harry's son)? The description says James P/Oc but taking the timing into consideration i assumed it might be James S P.
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