4/14/2018 c1 Guest
I can't get past the poor grammar, proper names are ALWAYS capitalized as is the first word of the sentence.
I can't get past the poor grammar, proper names are ALWAYS capitalized as is the first word of the sentence.
3/22/2018 c11 pipigrin 2
I love the sentence. .."Im going to do what I do best. Fight for you." PERFECTION!
I love the sentence. .."Im going to do what I do best. Fight for you." PERFECTION!
7/25/2017 c1 Guest
Apparently you don't understand the most basic rules of grammar, like when to use capitalization.
Apparently you don't understand the most basic rules of grammar, like when to use capitalization.
3/18/2016 c52 bc34
sequels plzzz
sequels plzzz
8/26/2015 c52 alexlc
Yeah awesome story. Can't wait to read the sequels. :)
Yeah awesome story. Can't wait to read the sequels. :)
5/31/2014 c53 7Dimitri's Secret Lover
This was great! I felt like there could've been a little more drama but I love the normal ness of it too.
This was great! I felt like there could've been a little more drama but I love the normal ness of it too.
1/2/2013 c50 roza
yayayayayayaya! sequel! lol wow I think I'm turning in to sophie and lexy...lol
yayayayayayaya! sequel! lol wow I think I'm turning in to sophie and lexy...lol
1/2/2013 c48 roza
oh come on! did the rushan have to get that procedure done? he is sooo hotttttt!
oh come on! did the rushan have to get that procedure done? he is sooo hotttttt!
1/2/2013 c46 roza
wow! you authors are always mean. you always wanna kill people...lol I read one and I sware that author killed rose like 3 times. thank goodness for Lissa!
wow! you authors are always mean. you always wanna kill people...lol I read one and I sware that author killed rose like 3 times. thank goodness for Lissa!
1/2/2013 c45 roza
wow! I have read a lot of fan fics but I didn't believe you when you said that this one would be different. I love this! it's filled with fluff, humer and a lot of random stuff. great job so far and I would certainly be looking forward to reading the sequel and of corse the rest of this story!
wow! I have read a lot of fan fics but I didn't believe you when you said that this one would be different. I love this! it's filled with fluff, humer and a lot of random stuff. great job so far and I would certainly be looking forward to reading the sequel and of corse the rest of this story!
12/30/2012 c1 roza
oh wow tell me about it! i never get it! and, yes I read a lot of fan fictions so I know...lol someone is always writing about how he left for tasha but I guess this one is different. he didn't leave with tasha so that could only be a good thing. lol...
oh wow tell me about it! i never get it! and, yes I read a lot of fan fictions so I know...lol someone is always writing about how he left for tasha but I guess this one is different. he didn't leave with tasha so that could only be a good thing. lol...
2/18/2012 c53 karla
Best story every, i love it very much thanks for writing
Best story every, i love it very much thanks for writing