for The Secrets Between Friends6/30/2014 c1 
6MarcelineFan
You did this extra right. The summary felt kinda innuendo to me, though...if ya know what I mean...
6MarcelineFanYou did this extra right. The summary felt kinda innuendo to me, though...if ya know what I mean...
6/1/2012 c1 bug2buga
Hey, you're like kind of awesome! I read your reviews on that Astroboy story (I love astro boy) and saw that you liked Avatar, which I really like too...BUT THEN I SAW THAT U LIKED MY LITTLE PONY! I was like "WOOOOTTT!" Then I read this and I was like "DOUBLE !"
Hey, you're like kind of awesome! I read your reviews on that Astroboy story (I love astro boy) and saw that you liked Avatar, which I really like too...BUT THEN I SAW THAT U LIKED MY LITTLE PONY! I was like "WOOOOTTT!" Then I read this and I was like "DOUBLE !"
2/20/2012 c1 2ItShallBeSo
I liked it, actually.
To everyone saying 'this should be Horror' trust me, it's not Horror. You want Horror? Go and read Cupcakes. That involves torture, murder and cannibalism.
Poor Rainbow Dash always seems to be the one to get tied up in stories!
Thank you so much for writing Flutterdash! Or Rainbowshy? Lol.
And to wise guy, or whatever you're called, the reason no one 'JUST MAKES MALE OCS' is because it's hard to stop them from becoming Marty Stues and taking over the story. Many people (such as me) find it annoying when fanfiction archives are filled with stories containing OCs that are perfect, sleeping with all the main characters and the main character in a story that's supposed to be FANFICTION, not ORIGINAL. You also sound like you are homophobic and/or against gays/lesbians. Why?
Anyway, this story isn't bad.
2ItShallBeSoI liked it, actually.
To everyone saying 'this should be Horror' trust me, it's not Horror. You want Horror? Go and read Cupcakes. That involves torture, murder and cannibalism.
Poor Rainbow Dash always seems to be the one to get tied up in stories!
Thank you so much for writing Flutterdash! Or Rainbowshy? Lol.
And to wise guy, or whatever you're called, the reason no one 'JUST MAKES MALE OCS' is because it's hard to stop them from becoming Marty Stues and taking over the story. Many people (such as me) find it annoying when fanfiction archives are filled with stories containing OCs that are perfect, sleeping with all the main characters and the main character in a story that's supposed to be FANFICTION, not ORIGINAL. You also sound like you are homophobic and/or against gays/lesbians. Why?
Anyway, this story isn't bad.
12/23/2011 c1 KungFuTruffle
So... they kidnapped Rainbow Dash, mutilated her tail, attacked Pinkie Pie in order to keep it a secret, and were planning on using a spell that can only be considered Dark Magic in order to manipulate the mind and feelings of the ruler of the realm?
I think this should be under "Horror" rather than "Romance". Good god.
So... they kidnapped Rainbow Dash, mutilated her tail, attacked Pinkie Pie in order to keep it a secret, and were planning on using a spell that can only be considered Dark Magic in order to manipulate the mind and feelings of the ruler of the realm?
I think this should be under "Horror" rather than "Romance". Good god.
10/9/2011 c1 1DiagnoseLover
This story just didnt seem realistic to me...
After causing Rainbow much fear and pain and breaking her trust, untying her makes everything all better and they just ride off into the sunset? o_O Doesn't seem likely...
1DiagnoseLoverThis story just didnt seem realistic to me...
After causing Rainbow much fear and pain and breaking her trust, untying her makes everything all better and they just ride off into the sunset? o_O Doesn't seem likely...
8/8/2011 c1 9Little Jackie Papercut
Ow.
Don't get me wrong I like this pairing there needs to be more of it.
But I kind of have to deny on principle any fic that LITERALLY STATES that EVERYONE IS GAY.
Which is too bad because as far as I can tell you're the only one actually writing Flutterdash on this site.
9Little Jackie PapercutOw.
Don't get me wrong I like this pairing there needs to be more of it.
But I kind of have to deny on principle any fic that LITERALLY STATES that EVERYONE IS GAY.
Which is too bad because as far as I can tell you're the only one actually writing Flutterdash on this site.
7/11/2011 c1 C0lorfulRain
That was hilarious xD
I like how you didn't take the Fluttershy/RD thing too far, and made it cute and believable instead of making them out of nowhere be passionately in love and make out xD Also, I kind of doubt every female in the town is a lesbian, but oh well I found that to be hilarious xD
I love one shots too, they're usually well written, short, sweet, and to he point c:
That was hilarious xD
I like how you didn't take the Fluttershy/RD thing too far, and made it cute and believable instead of making them out of nowhere be passionately in love and make out xD Also, I kind of doubt every female in the town is a lesbian, but oh well I found that to be hilarious xD
I love one shots too, they're usually well written, short, sweet, and to he point c:
7/11/2011 c1 wise guy malik
WHY THE FUCK DO YOU GUYS ALWAYS HAVE TO WRITE STORIES THAT INVOLE THEM BEING LESBIENS WHY NOT JUST MAKE OC MALE CHRACTERS!
look im sorry just annoyed with people always making stories with them being lesbo's all the time i just see this all the time.
WHY THE FUCK DO YOU GUYS ALWAYS HAVE TO WRITE STORIES THAT INVOLE THEM BEING LESBIENS WHY NOT JUST MAKE OC MALE CHRACTERS!
look im sorry just annoyed with people always making stories with them being lesbo's all the time i just see this all the time.