for Devil's Game7/31/2011 c1 
5Kara no Usagi
I didn't think this was too long, nor too short, it's the perfect length. ^^
I really liked this, it pretty much summed the life of a magical girl. It all flowed nicely, great job with this!
5Kara no UsagiI didn't think this was too long, nor too short, it's the perfect length. ^^
I really liked this, it pretty much summed the life of a magical girl. It all flowed nicely, great job with this!
7/13/2011 c1 24Danny Barefoot
Nice point at the end about the Puella Magi's one remaining way out. Better to write a good short poem than one thats too long, but do write some more poems or stories!
24Danny BarefootNice point at the end about the Puella Magi's one remaining way out. Better to write a good short poem than one thats too long, but do write some more poems or stories!