for A Problem with Pinkie Pie6/8/2014 c1 Pinki pie
I hope your viewers like it but I did not do that
I hope your viewers like it but I did not do that
2/2/2014 c1 Kitty Feline
Quite spectacular. Had me reading to the last word. Keep it up! :-)
Quite spectacular. Had me reading to the last word. Keep it up! :-)
1/8/2013 c1 Local jerk
I do find the murderfics kinda overbearing at times however you don't see anyone complaining on TAWoG fics and literally almost all of them are murderfics and/or dramatic family breakups. Just sayin
I do find the murderfics kinda overbearing at times however you don't see anyone complaining on TAWoG fics and literally almost all of them are murderfics and/or dramatic family breakups. Just sayin
4/19/2012 c1 0ion9
Few corrections:
"Will something spurn"
Do you mean 'spark'? 'Spurn' is the opposite of what you'd want to happen in any romantic endeavour.
"when Rarity revealed the town's love life"
The -town- has a love life? I'm filing that under 'things I literally cannot imagine'.
Do you mean "the town's night life"?
Few corrections:
"Will something spurn"
Do you mean 'spark'? 'Spurn' is the opposite of what you'd want to happen in any romantic endeavour.
"when Rarity revealed the town's love life"
The -town- has a love life? I'm filing that under 'things I literally cannot imagine'.
Do you mean "the town's night life"?
12/23/2011 c1 KungFuTruffle
Was both cute and in character. Being friends with Pinkie is probably both the funnest and most frustrating thing you can do.
I like the fact that you used the real Celestia, instead of Trollestia or, even worse, Molestia.
Was both cute and in character. Being friends with Pinkie is probably both the funnest and most frustrating thing you can do.
I like the fact that you used the real Celestia, instead of Trollestia or, even worse, Molestia.
10/10/2011 c1 
7Chimcharlover13
Not bad at all. There was errors here and there, like when you wrote "Pinkie said to Pinkie" or something like that, but overall it was pretty clean. Now, as for the rest of it, it was pretty sweet. The parts with Spike were hilarious, as they should be, so that was nice to see...oh, but it's: "Cross my heart and hope to FLY", not die. Your pairings were a bit unorthodox, like Twilight liking Celestia and Rainbow liking Fluttershy...but, it worked out alright. Pinkie being sent to Celestia via Spike's "mailing" was unusual, but interesting; makes you wonder what would REALLY happen, eh? I do agree with the fact that I also wonder why they always bow to Celestia; it doesn't seem like she'd care either way. The only thing that didn't make a lot of sense was the ending; I don't really see what happened, or why Spike got punished, or what Pinkie was talking about.
All-in-all, a very cute story about feelings, and a nice shout-out to Twilight and Pinkie!
7Chimcharlover13Not bad at all. There was errors here and there, like when you wrote "Pinkie said to Pinkie" or something like that, but overall it was pretty clean. Now, as for the rest of it, it was pretty sweet. The parts with Spike were hilarious, as they should be, so that was nice to see...oh, but it's: "Cross my heart and hope to FLY", not die. Your pairings were a bit unorthodox, like Twilight liking Celestia and Rainbow liking Fluttershy...but, it worked out alright. Pinkie being sent to Celestia via Spike's "mailing" was unusual, but interesting; makes you wonder what would REALLY happen, eh? I do agree with the fact that I also wonder why they always bow to Celestia; it doesn't seem like she'd care either way. The only thing that didn't make a lot of sense was the ending; I don't really see what happened, or why Spike got punished, or what Pinkie was talking about.
All-in-all, a very cute story about feelings, and a nice shout-out to Twilight and Pinkie!
8/26/2011 c1 19A Schoolday
Yeah, MLP is defiantly Femeslash/yuri fodder, majority of my favorite pairings from this cartoon are yuri.
Also TwilightxPinkie is my OTP ;) thanks for making this.
19A SchooldayYeah, MLP is defiantly Femeslash/yuri fodder, majority of my favorite pairings from this cartoon are yuri.
Also TwilightxPinkie is my OTP ;) thanks for making this.