
8/1/2011 c3
9ceci9123
it's great! sorry, but my english is irregular :$ I love it your story! update soon please!

it's great! sorry, but my english is irregular :$ I love it your story! update soon please!
8/1/2011 c3 ardana
You have an interesting beginning to your story. Leah pushing Bella over the cliff and the burn beginning. I wonder what Alice has decided to do to fix everything. It will be interesting to get a few more answers. So far the chapters are quite short, so there has not been a great deal of story to review, but the premise has promise.
You have an interesting beginning to your story. Leah pushing Bella over the cliff and the burn beginning. I wonder what Alice has decided to do to fix everything. It will be interesting to get a few more answers. So far the chapters are quite short, so there has not been a great deal of story to review, but the premise has promise.
8/1/2011 c3 Arianna 24
please write more it's good.
perhaps make the chapters a bit longer than they are but please write more
please write more it's good.
perhaps make the chapters a bit longer than they are but please write more