
7/14/2011 c1
5HomestuckGirl
I really like it! I hope you will write a follow-up or something. And I know how you feel with reviews. I don't see what the big deal is with signing up/signing in. It takes 10 seconds! :)

I really like it! I hope you will write a follow-up or something. And I know how you feel with reviews. I don't see what the big deal is with signing up/signing in. It takes 10 seconds! :)
7/14/2011 c1
2Phoenyx Flame
I really like this, but the one nitpick I have is when Shadow first speaks (When Rarity says, "Wait, I haven't seen you before."), he says 'nobody'. Shouldn't it be no pony? If it was intentional, sorry, I'm just a nitpicker. But still, I really enjoyed it :D.

I really like this, but the one nitpick I have is when Shadow first speaks (When Rarity says, "Wait, I haven't seen you before."), he says 'nobody'. Shouldn't it be no pony? If it was intentional, sorry, I'm just a nitpicker. But still, I really enjoyed it :D.