for My True Love7/29/2012 c1 
1blackvelvet33
This story was cute, but it could use another read-through. You should decide which tense you want to use (past or present) and change everything to make it parallel It could use more detail to make it more emotionally charged. It does have potential to be a really nice one-shot if you fix it ip a bit.
Lily
1blackvelvet33This story was cute, but it could use another read-through. You should decide which tense you want to use (past or present) and change everything to make it parallel It could use more detail to make it more emotionally charged. It does have potential to be a really nice one-shot if you fix it ip a bit.
Lily
1/15/2012 c1 half blood princess
OMM THIS IS CUTE! i love love stories! its soooo cute! is it too much trouble if you made one with me and neville?
OMM THIS IS CUTE! i love love stories! its soooo cute! is it too much trouble if you made one with me and neville?
7/15/2011 c1 3Amber Jones 11
I do care! Hahaha XD Can you more Please ? I dont know if you were thinking already but O really tell you,you should ! :)
3Amber Jones 11I do care! Hahaha XD Can you more Please ? I dont know if you were thinking already but O really tell you,you should ! :)