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6/30/2018 c10 1Korin Dragoon
More please, you left a lot of questions unanswered, how did Harry and Svetlana meet?, why Hermione doesn't like her?, why is her were form different from Lupin's?, does she in fact have control?, what's next for quartet?
2/16/2015 c10 Hatefulsauser99
Love it I love this story it beautiful everything in their the werewolf scene the fight and ending
By hatefulsauser
8/3/2013 c1 Guest
Great but too short dude wayyyy too short
I've read hour long chapters
9/10/2011 c10 Guest
just read it from start to current end. a bit choppy overall. needs a bit of expanding to give it a more even flow. H.P. chariters seem ok but Svetlana a bit to much cardstock as of yet, but coming along (not much depth to her personality as of yet). I am more familiar with HP personalitys so that gives them more depth to me even thogh your version is 2D or cardboard.

reads like an outline rater than a story as of this point.

good start, finish the outline this way then come back and put some meat on the bones of the story.

Miles (a sailor) Martin

from the Brass Goggles Steampunk forum
9/8/2011 c9 1DontHateMeJustCuzImAwesome
i cant wait to read more!
8/19/2011 c1 Tamy
I LUV IT!
7/15/2011 c1 130Brightfire15
This looks cool. I'm looking forward to reading more. :)

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