10/14 c1 Guest
I was going to give this a try but the continuous use of japanese words in an English novel is a annoying.
I was going to give this a try but the continuous use of japanese words in an English novel is a annoying.
10/3 c3 Jibberflex
Ok I don't like this. She barges in and starts demanding stuff. I already hate her character in this.
Ok I don't like this. She barges in and starts demanding stuff. I already hate her character in this.
10/1 c12 Serana Ass Enjoyer
Just to clear up the common misconception Shadow Clones arent a Forbidden Jutsu, Multi Shadow Clones is a Forbidden Jutsu.
Just to clear up the common misconception Shadow Clones arent a Forbidden Jutsu, Multi Shadow Clones is a Forbidden Jutsu.
8/21 c13 Guest
Kinda surprised Anko hasn't had him check out the store more. Maybe give him some cash to buy things useful for both.
Kinda surprised Anko hasn't had him check out the store more. Maybe give him some cash to buy things useful for both.
8/21 c13 Guest
This story has one of the best done versions of Anko I've ever seen. All the characters are very well done actually. Really, really sucks there isn't a lot more chapters.
This story has one of the best done versions of Anko I've ever seen. All the characters are very well done actually. Really, really sucks there isn't a lot more chapters.
8/16 c19 Guest
please write more of this story and the haiey potter story too
please write more of this story and the haiey potter story too
8/15 c10 NarutoManiac2400
Idk how this gem of a story missed me… this is great. I’ve been to the whole thing up to this point and I can honestly say one of the top five gamer fics for sure
Idk how this gem of a story missed me… this is great. I’ve been to the whole thing up to this point and I can honestly say one of the top five gamer fics for sure
8/7 c19 80YeagerMeister31
Well, that was interesting that women is mysterious wonder who she really is ow we have Kisame what is he doing there shouldn't he be with the Akatsuki at this time, this certainly causes prolems, wonder who will arrive as backup will defo be needed now with mr Sushi arriving this mission is defo S-ranked now.
Well, that was interesting that women is mysterious wonder who she really is ow we have Kisame what is he doing there shouldn't he be with the Akatsuki at this time, this certainly causes prolems, wonder who will arrive as backup will defo be needed now with mr Sushi arriving this mission is defo S-ranked now.
8/5 c18 YeagerMeister31
Well, that was interesting some bonding between NaruIno not much though still amusing how strong Team 8 is.
Well, that was interesting some bonding between NaruIno not much though still amusing how strong Team 8 is.
8/4 c16 YeagerMeister31
Well, this monster seemed like something from Final Fantasy or Trials Of Cold Steel, I Wonder who the leaders are the mission should be interesting.
Well, this monster seemed like something from Final Fantasy or Trials Of Cold Steel, I Wonder who the leaders are the mission should be interesting.
8/4 c15 YeagerMeister31
It seems Team 8 is going well there all improving, Mizuki and Tsubaki won't be a problem, new mission sounds interesting.
It seems Team 8 is going well there all improving, Mizuki and Tsubaki won't be a problem, new mission sounds interesting.
8/1 c14 YeagerMeister31
Well, that was interesting should have said a better comeback that was so lame, still amusing chapter.
Well, that was interesting should have said a better comeback that was so lame, still amusing chapter.