
2/17/2024 c18
1uchiha-rune
my notifications didnt ring or pop up hwen you updated chaoter 18 again after the bug so I only found iut after chaoter 19, I’ll read it now though, it’s probably just as amazing as your other chaoters

my notifications didnt ring or pop up hwen you updated chaoter 18 again after the bug so I only found iut after chaoter 19, I’ll read it now though, it’s probably just as amazing as your other chaoters
2/17/2024 c19 Gamelover41592
epic work on this chapter, I was hoping you would keep the nami dungeon in :D
epic work on this chapter, I was hoping you would keep the nami dungeon in :D
2/17/2024 c19 Martin-di-Arcov
I feel like i belong in the aslume for saying this but
what are the Lore implications of Kisame being in Nami at this point?!
what's gonna happen?! how is it going to happen?! how dangerous is the Dungeon? i need more!
good chapter! I'm really curious about the "totally not a op ninja" woman, she tickles my "Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon" senses something fierce
I feel like i belong in the aslume for saying this but
what are the Lore implications of Kisame being in Nami at this point?!
what's gonna happen?! how is it going to happen?! how dangerous is the Dungeon? i need more!
good chapter! I'm really curious about the "totally not a op ninja" woman, she tickles my "Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon" senses something fierce
2/17/2024 c19
5savitarsurffer
this chapter brings back memories
I still remember the old version and if that one was good, this one is even more complete and better.
thanks for your hard work on the story
Question: Will Hinta use two elements at the same time as he can use juken, thus creating a more deadly nintaijutsu? just imagine it: water and lightning at the same time
If the Raikage is strong she could kick his butt hahahaha

this chapter brings back memories
I still remember the old version and if that one was good, this one is even more complete and better.
thanks for your hard work on the story
Question: Will Hinta use two elements at the same time as he can use juken, thus creating a more deadly nintaijutsu? just imagine it: water and lightning at the same time
If the Raikage is strong she could kick his butt hahahaha
2/17/2024 c18
7bored peasant
Someone needs to convince Naruto that he needs to put points into wisdom, intelligence, and charisma. Someone like a mentor, perhaps. He is 7 levels ahead of Hinata and has lower stats in those areas than her. He could have put plenty of points in there before now.

Someone needs to convince Naruto that he needs to put points into wisdom, intelligence, and charisma. Someone like a mentor, perhaps. He is 7 levels ahead of Hinata and has lower stats in those areas than her. He could have put plenty of points in there before now.
2/15/2024 c18 CoffeeAficionado1
A few things.
1. Very nice chapter. Things are looking up for Naruto. Please specifically write at least a few paragraphs for when Naruto and Hinata ‘sleep’ next to each other. I can see Hinata being awake the entire night, if she could she would be pacing the room like she did on the last movie when she kept being indecisive with giving Naruto the new scarf. Probably closer to rolling from one side to the other. Does she want her back to him like a little spoon or does she want to watch his sleeping face. She is adorable.
2. It’s funny, just read everyone elses comments yet I noticed no one mentioned Haku. I noticed you kept saying Haku versus using a pronoun like you would anywhere else. So either you are teasing readers on what could be Hakus gender or you are still deciding yourself.
3. Hopefully Naruto figures out the hidden quest to work with Zabazu. Easy way to get Mei, spare him and send him back with supplies and possibly money from Gato.
4. Am I the only one that can’t wait for Hottimaru to actually speak? Please let these two be like brothers that annoy each other on purpose, but the moment someone threatens the other the first one loses it to defend them.
d. Want to end with again, great story. Ignore flamers/trolls as you are just feeding them what they want. Nicely done.
A few things.
1. Very nice chapter. Things are looking up for Naruto. Please specifically write at least a few paragraphs for when Naruto and Hinata ‘sleep’ next to each other. I can see Hinata being awake the entire night, if she could she would be pacing the room like she did on the last movie when she kept being indecisive with giving Naruto the new scarf. Probably closer to rolling from one side to the other. Does she want her back to him like a little spoon or does she want to watch his sleeping face. She is adorable.
2. It’s funny, just read everyone elses comments yet I noticed no one mentioned Haku. I noticed you kept saying Haku versus using a pronoun like you would anywhere else. So either you are teasing readers on what could be Hakus gender or you are still deciding yourself.
3. Hopefully Naruto figures out the hidden quest to work with Zabazu. Easy way to get Mei, spare him and send him back with supplies and possibly money from Gato.
4. Am I the only one that can’t wait for Hottimaru to actually speak? Please let these two be like brothers that annoy each other on purpose, but the moment someone threatens the other the first one loses it to defend them.
d. Want to end with again, great story. Ignore flamers/trolls as you are just feeding them what they want. Nicely done.
2/10/2024 c3 please don't1
I dont know about you, but i wouldn't like to be around someone who threatened me with torture. It's in a lot of fics where the mc forgives WAY too easily, sry this just rubbed me the wrong way.
I dont know about you, but i wouldn't like to be around someone who threatened me with torture. It's in a lot of fics where the mc forgives WAY too easily, sry this just rubbed me the wrong way.
2/10/2024 c18
20Ander Arias
Well, it took long enough, but the chapter is finally visible.
Yep, Kakashi is a pretty lousy sensei, isn't he? Sadistic as she may be, Anko is doing Team 7 a huge favor.

Well, it took long enough, but the chapter is finally visible.
Yep, Kakashi is a pretty lousy sensei, isn't he? Sadistic as she may be, Anko is doing Team 7 a huge favor.