for Uzumaki Naruto: Dawn of the Gamer Remastered7/24 c17 LionsSolitude
I thought Naruto had learned a taijutsu fight style as well that complimented his kenjutsu fight style.
I thought Naruto had learned a taijutsu fight style as well that complimented his kenjutsu fight style.
7/13 c19 DarkLight Kage
So glad i came back to this after so long. Always really enjoyed your stories and cant wait to see more!
So glad i came back to this after so long. Always really enjoyed your stories and cant wait to see more!
7/10 c19 marquis.shax
you ever gonna update this or just follow the example of people like VFSnake and Animeharem by keep making NEW stories and eventually completely forgetting about all your older stories including the "new" ones as you keep making more?
you ever gonna update this or just follow the example of people like VFSnake and Animeharem by keep making NEW stories and eventually completely forgetting about all your older stories including the "new" ones as you keep making more?
7/8 c1 
4SilverMidas
Awesome story. Can't to read what happens next. While I wait, im going to read your HP gamer
4SilverMidasAwesome story. Can't to read what happens next. While I wait, im going to read your HP gamer
7/1 c1 Soul Sendant
wow who would have thought that this would be another pile of shit fanfiction. someone intelligent may want to get together with the people writing and posting on fanfiction and archive of our own and let them know that the chinese sites offer better stories and fanfiction than both fanfiction and archive of our own combined. its quite sad that the slaves of china do better than the ignorant fucks pretending not to be ignorant slaves everywhere else
wow who would have thought that this would be another pile of shit fanfiction. someone intelligent may want to get together with the people writing and posting on fanfiction and archive of our own and let them know that the chinese sites offer better stories and fanfiction than both fanfiction and archive of our own combined. its quite sad that the slaves of china do better than the ignorant fucks pretending not to be ignorant slaves everywhere else
6/14 c19 Iquarius
Looking forward to the next chapter, but I hope this story gets updated more consistently.
Looking forward to the next chapter, but I hope this story gets updated more consistently.
6/5 c5 kratos264
Nope im out anko sucks well not cannon anko but this bitch of a person you wrote as anko. Let alone her mentoring naruto makes zero sense at all they literally have completely different ideas and styles. Good luck with the novel
Nope im out anko sucks well not cannon anko but this bitch of a person you wrote as anko. Let alone her mentoring naruto makes zero sense at all they literally have completely different ideas and styles. Good luck with the novel
6/5 c4 kratos264
Yeah anko gets worse and worse bringing her into the dungeon and having her stay is making the story worse and worse every chapter. If she stays around after chapter 4 thats it for me honestly dungeons already kinda made it stupid but then anko is literally the worst
Yeah anko gets worse and worse bringing her into the dungeon and having her stay is making the story worse and worse every chapter. If she stays around after chapter 4 thats it for me honestly dungeons already kinda made it stupid but then anko is literally the worst
6/5 c3 kratos264
I dont remember anko being this awful you write her like shes the worst bitch ever. And naruto just goes with it? Makes no sense id literally plan to murder someone repeatedly threatening to torture me not decide to help them level
I dont remember anko being this awful you write her like shes the worst bitch ever. And naruto just goes with it? Makes no sense id literally plan to murder someone repeatedly threatening to torture me not decide to help them level