for Uzumaki Naruto: Dawn of the Gamer Remastered5/6 c19 Guest
Really enjoyed this story, hopefully it gets an update soon. Can wait for more.
Really enjoyed this story, hopefully it gets an update soon. Can wait for more.
4/21 c1 tylor13roney
little scared to read this its like written 13 yeas ago for19 chapters seems slow updates
little scared to read this its like written 13 yeas ago for19 chapters seems slow updates
4/18 c15 7legends
Glad to see you still type with this 1. What's the directions you are looking to take the rewrite. I enjoyed the original so I was just thinking to ask
Glad to see you still type with this 1. What's the directions you are looking to take the rewrite. I enjoyed the original so I was just thinking to ask
4/10 c14 Sahamosveb
The plot moves very slowly. I can say that fanfic is dead, even if the author writes once a month, the speed of the plot is too slow for the author to finish the fanfic in one human lifetime.
The plot moves very slowly. I can say that fanfic is dead, even if the author writes once a month, the speed of the plot is too slow for the author to finish the fanfic in one human lifetime.
3/27 c3 
1Verdauga
A decent chapter, though I have some concerns. All the detail in descriptions are cool, but kinda bloat things, especially when repeated. And Anko seems rather unreasonable here. She doesn't have much right to demand answers for the consequences of her intruding uninvited on a Bloodline's Secrets. Bloodline and Clan Secrets have always been a Big Thing in Naruto, and have consequences when people try things.
1VerdaugaA decent chapter, though I have some concerns. All the detail in descriptions are cool, but kinda bloat things, especially when repeated. And Anko seems rather unreasonable here. She doesn't have much right to demand answers for the consequences of her intruding uninvited on a Bloodline's Secrets. Bloodline and Clan Secrets have always been a Big Thing in Naruto, and have consequences when people try things.
3/21 c14 Guest
You mofo need to be put behind bars
You mofo need to be put behind bars
3/19 c19 2AscendedAbyss
No one is ready for Zabuza. He can beat B with full biju mode… never understand why people choose to add him at this venture in the story without instant death happening to all team members.
2AscendedAbyssNo one is ready for Zabuza. He can beat B with full biju mode… never understand why people choose to add him at this venture in the story without instant death happening to all team members.
3/16 c19 Guest
Your killing me with the lack of updates just one chapter please
Your killing me with the lack of updates just one chapter please
3/14 c15 1Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
So just more of Anko acting like a pedo for shits and giggles, huh?
1MuuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrdddSo just more of Anko acting like a pedo for shits and giggles, huh?
3/14 c14 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
This is gonna get old quick with Ino and even more people acting like Naruto's stupid because he doesn't know a girl who doesn't talk to him much has a crush on him, an orphan who's had other things to focus on more than on Hinata blushing around him. God why do Naruto Gamer stories always have someone or all of Team 10 involved so heavily?
This is gonna get old quick with Ino and even more people acting like Naruto's stupid because he doesn't know a girl who doesn't talk to him much has a crush on him, an orphan who's had other things to focus on more than on Hinata blushing around him. God why do Naruto Gamer stories always have someone or all of Team 10 involved so heavily?
3/14 c14 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Not a real tradition. Not everyone drinks so forcing kids to drink is just weird
Not a real tradition. Not everyone drinks so forcing kids to drink is just weird
3/14 c13 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Anko's curse mark is defective, that's why she got abandoned. She survived but her mark doesn't work like Sasuke's and the Sound Five's. The mark also doesn't go away when the creator dies so either someone gave her the wrong info within the story or you simply didn't know or purposely switched it which again would be another switch that only complicates the story and doesn't add to it
Anko's curse mark is defective, that's why she got abandoned. She survived but her mark doesn't work like Sasuke's and the Sound Five's. The mark also doesn't go away when the creator dies so either someone gave her the wrong info within the story or you simply didn't know or purposely switched it which again would be another switch that only complicates the story and doesn't add to it