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7/30/2019 c30 BARON2462
i AM ENJOYING THIS STORY A LOT HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE IT
12/14/2018 c30 WhiteEagle1985
A great story here so far! Looking forward to reading more!
3/4/2017 c29 Guest
shit fic don't read
2/5/2017 c30 Lady J
Good story. Your blending the different shows into the story line nicely. You do need to check your story's timeline a bit. It's a little abrupt when you jump from story line to story line. Also, check your grammar. I see quite a few places that could use a comma in place of a full stop and a few spelling mistakes. It's spelt Asgard, not Azgard, but all in all great story and keep up the good work! Please finish it.

Please...
1/19/2017 c29 Guest
So would love to get an update on how the rest are doing with the babies! I like Blue Bloods and would love to see a crossover with just Buffy sometime.
7/21/2014 c25 DragonHeart89
Is this story going to be completed?
6/20/2013 c25 Peanut Gallery
Well Dam, True a first class Work of fiction, from humor to characters your were spot on. My inner critic is sitting in a dart lonely feeling useless, good job.

Thanks for a Great Read,

Peanut Gallery
5/12/2013 c25 crvenashkorpija
Nice...any sequels? Really funy story...:-) Amusing to no end :-D
2/22/2013 c15 Guest
im still reading this because id like to know what happens but to be honest...you've got the makings of a good story but the execution, on the other hand, is a bit...off. the pace of your story, the speed at which you're moving events and "twists" aren't having as great an impact because you're throwing so much at the reader in so little time.

and the interactions between characters-yes, there will be tension and strife, these are two dynamically-opposite groups with the same agenda after all; who've both got a little bit of self-righteous indignation going on-could also do with a little work. i don't mind the genetic matches for the kids, that's your choice so whatever, and the who one-warrior-sees-another thing that the Jaffa got going on with the Scoobies is expected BUT it's like you can't decide whether you're keeping them all-Buffy, especially-in season 1-3 or post-season 8 persona. please, just choose one.

if they're at the stage where they're considered mature and responsible enough to handle having control of the Stargate by not only the Queen of England, her Prime Minister and the President of the United States, then they should be acting so. i just think that Buffy and the others are just not having any tolerance for bullshit OR politics at this stage in the game: they act like leaders, don't give a shit whether they earn the "respect" of the local or above governmental/paramilitary authorities, they just want you to get out of the way and let them do their job. i think they'd just see this as another on-going, long-term project on the Council's list. of course they'd give the bare minimum since a bullet can kill a person, slayer-enhanced or not-'course knowing this, a certain red-headed wiccan may have enchanted projectile-proof armor for all of them-but more than that is more then they should have to give.

so basically, all im saying is that maybe you should go back to the draft and polish it up a little.
1/16/2013 c25 3fierynightangel
spiffy cool!
10/18/2012 c25 locardxchange
Very good with a cute twist.
10/12/2012 c25 1Lazarus.357
A few grammar and punctuation errors, but still and all, nicely done, bravo.
1/18/2012 c25 jgood27
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
11/3/2011 c21 28CubsKing
Very interesting story. I can't wait to see where you take it.

FYI, the Goa'uld's name is spelled Nirrti.
10/12/2011 c18 7Taeniaea
Very Cool Story!
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