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8/20/2011 c3 25LucyOfNarnia
aha! Nice nice nice. Lol. I said that so many times.. but.. this is quite good. Update dear friend!
8/20/2011 c3 11HowWonderfulLifeIs
I'm curious as to the significance of carving
8/14/2011 c2 4Freedom4America4ever
Fianlly a story about David! Keep writing, I can't wait to find out want happens next!
8/12/2011 c1 me
yeah kc who are you?

and do you know me?

uh oh. you're not...

ok, just...who are you?
8/12/2011 c2 25LucyOfNarnia
Hmmmmm yikes! That's so sad bout her sis :( but this has been a very interesting and fun chapter besides! I like it, so update soon or I'll soak youse!
8/10/2011 c1 Kc
Well, Panther or Torch or Ivya or Luneta or Aravis or Peregrin Regis or Venia, whichever I will make up my mind to call you, it was interesting, and you have a very detailed way of writing, which a lot of people don't have. I agree, it was kind of short, but I look forward to further installments!
8/9/2011 c1 LucyOfNarnia
Ha! It's very very cool. And it's funny cause this character sounds a lot like a certain Italian pick pocket that will appear in my story ;) update soon. Sorry for taking so ling to review!
8/4/2011 c1 11HowWonderfulLifeIs
This really and truly brings dear Davy to life. And, if it matters, I would certainly love Davy in a heartbeat. He's so kind, but so reserved.
7/27/2011 c1 5Mayarin
interesting start! looking forward to see where its going
7/17/2011 c1 TheFlyingSeal
My first reaction to reading this chapter:

"Haha, oh David,"

Keep up the good work!
7/17/2011 c1 Red ROSe Queen
Oh wow! this looks like a gret stroy1! plz contin


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