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3BlueBookworm512
Awww, I loved the idea of Larten and Arra listening to country music (especially Taylor Swift! XP) to be reminded of each other ^-^ And the last line... I thought it was perfect for their relationship, seeing as they can both be too stubborn to ever admit they were wrong :P
Great job, and good luck in the contest! :)
3BlueBookworm512Awww, I loved the idea of Larten and Arra listening to country music (especially Taylor Swift! XP) to be reminded of each other ^-^ And the last line... I thought it was perfect for their relationship, seeing as they can both be too stubborn to ever admit they were wrong :P
Great job, and good luck in the contest! :)
7/17/2011 c1 Guest
Thank you all so much for your kind comments
I was so happy to see that after just putting the story up I already had 3 reviews
I was so excited :)
Can't wait to read everyone elses :D
Thank you all so much for your kind comments
I was so happy to see that after just putting the story up I already had 3 reviews
I was so excited :)
Can't wait to read everyone elses :D
7/17/2011 c1 4Preston-Tour
Amazing :O
I loved the image of Larten in Italy especially; you could see him lounging someplace where he could explore and of course Italy is just a vast historic exploration :)
I also loved the how each had their own little paragraph before being combined at the end for a joint conclusion.
Inspires *cough-pressures-cough* me to finish writting mine...
Ha :)
Great job
Preston :)
4Preston-TourAmazing :O
I loved the image of Larten in Italy especially; you could see him lounging someplace where he could explore and of course Italy is just a vast historic exploration :)
I also loved the how each had their own little paragraph before being combined at the end for a joint conclusion.
Inspires *cough-pressures-cough* me to finish writting mine...
Ha :)
Great job
Preston :)