for The Warm Heart that was that was turned into Ice12/29/2014 c5 AngelKitty27
Is your computer fixed yet? It's been 2 YEARS.. I don't really want to rush you or anything. Just don't rewrite the story. It's perfectly fine the way it is! When authors rewrite the story they never do it.. I don't know if you are one of those authors or not but I don't want to take the chance. Other readers like your story and want it to continue. GREAT STORY! I LOVED IT!
Is your computer fixed yet? It's been 2 YEARS.. I don't really want to rush you or anything. Just don't rewrite the story. It's perfectly fine the way it is! When authors rewrite the story they never do it.. I don't know if you are one of those authors or not but I don't want to take the chance. Other readers like your story and want it to continue. GREAT STORY! I LOVED IT!
3/23/2012 c5 Patricia
Please update soon.. :)
Please update soon.. :)
2/22/2012 c5 Princess happy
It's ok. gihehehe :)
It's ok. gihehehe :)
11/3/2011 c4 ShiningStellar
Review for ‘The Warm Heart that was that was turned into Ice’:
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About your title aren’t it supposed to be ‘The Warm Heart That Was Turned into Ice’ instead having double ‘that was’.
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Oh yes, 'I am the son of a Heartfilia, son of Judo Heartfilia' Lance replied
'Oh my father's brother… I guess I'll take you in as my brother' Lucy said
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I was like “Aren’t Lucy father’s name is Judo?” so I referred back in chapter 1 and in summary, Lucy father’s name here is Gary. 0.0
Seriously Natsu ‘Hamana’? It’s annoying.
So these stories kind of similar with ‘It’s the real thing’, with all those Dragons that are involve and etc.
Well, it’s pretty good though, and Lucy was like Super Strong.
Review for ‘The Warm Heart that was that was turned into Ice’:
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About your title aren’t it supposed to be ‘The Warm Heart That Was Turned into Ice’ instead having double ‘that was’.
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Oh yes, 'I am the son of a Heartfilia, son of Judo Heartfilia' Lance replied
'Oh my father's brother… I guess I'll take you in as my brother' Lucy said
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I was like “Aren’t Lucy father’s name is Judo?” so I referred back in chapter 1 and in summary, Lucy father’s name here is Gary. 0.0
Seriously Natsu ‘Hamana’? It’s annoying.
So these stories kind of similar with ‘It’s the real thing’, with all those Dragons that are involve and etc.
Well, it’s pretty good though, and Lucy was like Super Strong.
10/7/2011 c3 Anastaisia Zunk
I like the story one of the best and i read alot of fan-fic hope you continue.
I like the story one of the best and i read alot of fan-fic hope you continue.
10/7/2011 c3 
2Xcixblk
Yay Lucy is back and she's stronger and awesome XD I love ur story hehe :D update soon ;)
Angel~~
2XcixblkYay Lucy is back and she's stronger and awesome XD I love ur story hehe :D update soon ;)
Angel~~
10/7/2011 c3 ShiningStellar
It's not suck it's pretty good actually but yeah I do sense a bit rushed-ness but still it went well, by the way..ice, fire, light and dark ? But where do Lucy got the wind?
Interesting. 'four element old generation dragon slayer' that's unexpected. I was imagining that probably she control all the constellations ^_^. Well update soon but take your time :)
It's not suck it's pretty good actually but yeah I do sense a bit rushed-ness but still it went well, by the way..ice, fire, light and dark ? But where do Lucy got the wind?
Interesting. 'four element old generation dragon slayer' that's unexpected. I was imagining that probably she control all the constellations ^_^. Well update soon but take your time :)
10/7/2011 c3 King-or-Whatever
Loved this! I actually like it when they make Lucy stronger than she really is xD
Loved this! I actually like it when they make Lucy stronger than she really is xD
8/14/2011 c2 Psycho-Jellybean
I cant wait for more .
I really want to know what powers Lucy's mother gave her XD
I cant wait for more .
I really want to know what powers Lucy's mother gave her XD
8/14/2011 c2 4Beauty.Of.Lies
Hello! I like your story so far! :D
Keep up the awesome work! I cant wait for upcoming chapters! I wonder who she'll get with? Hopefully Gray! I love GraLu :3
Good luck and make sure you take care of yourself! Bye!
-MayzieMouse ('.')
4Beauty.Of.LiesHello! I like your story so far! :D
Keep up the awesome work! I cant wait for upcoming chapters! I wonder who she'll get with? Hopefully Gray! I love GraLu :3
Good luck and make sure you take care of yourself! Bye!
-MayzieMouse ('.')