
2/25/2018 c1 Guest
continue
please!
continue
please!
10/4/2014 c1 unending Agony
More please. Its addicting
More please. Its addicting
9/28/2013 c1 Guest
Please continue, I rather like where this seems to be going. You're an amazing author btw, I've read all your fics. I like CHERUB ones and this is especially good because its not James and se annoying girl straight away!
Please continue, I rather like where this seems to be going. You're an amazing author btw, I've read all your fics. I like CHERUB ones and this is especially good because its not James and se annoying girl straight away!
2/26/2013 c1 Guest
you need continued it looks sick nice one
you need continued it looks sick nice one
1/1/2012 c1
13thebestoftimes11
Love it! Who is Mac thinking of to go with James? Please write more!
thebestoftimes :)

Love it! Who is Mac thinking of to go with James? Please write more!
thebestoftimes :)
12/21/2011 c1
19basscymru
I don't think you faffed about. I'd like you to carry on writing more, in fact! It could be interesting.

I don't think you faffed about. I'd like you to carry on writing more, in fact! It could be interesting.
11/2/2011 c1 11111111111111111111
great story so far need ore though. lol. write more please
great story so far need ore though. lol. write more please
11/1/2011 c1 29019801534
plz carry on. This is rly gd. Who does mac think could g with James? Who! Luv the story possesses write more :)
plz carry on. This is rly gd. Who does mac think could g with James? Who! Luv the story possesses write more :)
9/25/2011 c1 b00kw0rm.97
Hi! Please go on. It's a really clever plot. I like your OC: Finn. I can't wait for you to update, please do!
Hi! Please go on. It's a really clever plot. I like your OC: Finn. I can't wait for you to update, please do!
8/2/2011 c1 LOVES YOU
WRITE MORE!
I NEED TO READ MORE
WRITE MORE!
I NEED TO READ MORE
7/21/2011 c1
7TheAwesomeJellyBean
that was so cool i so can not wait for the next chapter update asap please!

that was so cool i so can not wait for the next chapter update asap please!