for Don't Move Kyle3/7/2020 c1 Mystery rex
omfg it was amazing.
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omfg it was amazing.
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2/4/2018 c3 Guest
Plllllzzzzzzzzz continue I just continue
Plllllzzzzzzzzz continue I just continue
1/18/2016 c3 wolf 10
I want more so when you are not so busy can u do some more
I want more so when you are not so busy can u do some more
12/20/2014 c3 lunarox88
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
please pLeAsE PLEASE tell me somepony HAS PMed you! i am not sure how long i can live without this! it made me laugh (if it's not meant for laughs (which i'm sure it was) i am sorry)
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
:3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 (4 those who don't no, those are cat faces XD)
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
please pLeAsE PLEASE tell me somepony HAS PMed you! i am not sure how long i can live without this! it made me laugh (if it's not meant for laughs (which i'm sure it was) i am sorry)
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
:3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 (4 those who don't no, those are cat faces XD)
7/22/2014 c3 
6Kyle3698
Too bad u stopped it. There arnt any other fics on James and kyle and I find these opens the interesting ones. Where James doesn't know how to react to it.
Anyway I enjoyed the chapters. They were good.
6Kyle3698Too bad u stopped it. There arnt any other fics on James and kyle and I find these opens the interesting ones. Where James doesn't know how to react to it.
Anyway I enjoyed the chapters. They were good.
6/23/2013 c1 anonymous
It's great! I definitely want more.
It's great! I definitely want more.
2/21/2013 c1 Meatball Adams
Great story. Interesting and goes against James' beliefs, adding a bit of intrigue and tension. I think it was great and it'd be good to see more. As an alternate storyline it was good. the characters felt as real as in CHERUB and the description was detailed.
Improvement: More backround info and description of faces and of the interior setting.
overall: pretty good
Great story. Interesting and goes against James' beliefs, adding a bit of intrigue and tension. I think it was great and it'd be good to see more. As an alternate storyline it was good. the characters felt as real as in CHERUB and the description was detailed.
Improvement: More backround info and description of faces and of the interior setting.
overall: pretty good
11/14/2012 c3 Aima
If some one does take this over, please notify us? Even with the occasionally bad grammar this story is worth it.
If some one does take this over, please notify us? Even with the occasionally bad grammar this story is worth it.
10/31/2011 c1 29019801534
Brucey Boy, let's just say James is exploring his gay side...
^ Best line - lmao
Brucey Boy, let's just say James is exploring his gay side...
^ Best line - lmao
7/28/2011 c2 4goddessofolympia
Oohh! I liked it, please continue. I liked the first chapter more than the second but interesting story, I love the whole James/Kyle gay tension thing
4goddessofolympiaOohh! I liked it, please continue. I liked the first chapter more than the second but interesting story, I love the whole James/Kyle gay tension thing