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3SnartMiniMarshmellow
What I would really love to see is an alternate ending to this where Renko survived and Kensi died. Just to see the team's reactions. I think it would be heart-breaking and would give readers a lot more to connect to. We don't really get to meet Renko in the show so we feel more detached from him; and though it makes us feel bad. We would feel worse if it was Kensi: who we've known since day 1.
3SnartMiniMarshmellowWhat I would really love to see is an alternate ending to this where Renko survived and Kensi died. Just to see the team's reactions. I think it would be heart-breaking and would give readers a lot more to connect to. We don't really get to meet Renko in the show so we feel more detached from him; and though it makes us feel bad. We would feel worse if it was Kensi: who we've known since day 1.
3/12/2017 c6 6ashmagic17
I love your story! Please update soon! It's really good :) what happens next?!
6ashmagic17I love your story! Please update soon! It's really good :) what happens next?!
11/1/2016 c2 KensiZivaJJ Blye
This is a great story but the agent who didn't make it had O blood and that's kensi's blood type but she survives so it gets confusing
This is a great story but the agent who didn't make it had O blood and that's kensi's blood type but she survives so it gets confusing
6/18/2016 c6 Popinpup
Please update. You said you had the next two chapters ready but we're are they.
Please update. You said you had the next two chapters ready but we're are they.
4/21/2016 c2 Hi
I love this fanfic so far, but why did one have to die:( I really hope it's not Kensi but on the segment that had the one agent ending with no heartbeat, the emt had ask if the O blood transfusion was ready and that was Kensi's blood type in this
I love this fanfic so far, but why did one have to die:( I really hope it's not Kensi but on the segment that had the one agent ending with no heartbeat, the emt had ask if the O blood transfusion was ready and that was Kensi's blood type in this
4/19/2016 c6 Lauren
This is grand sweety, keep up the good work
This is grand sweety, keep up the good work
4/19/2016 c6 Hi I'm bob
I like it.
I like it.
4/19/2016 c6 Guest
GREAT
GREAT
4/19/2016 c6 Liv
This is great, love the plot twist
This is great, love the plot twist
4/19/2016 c6 Anonymous
I love this fanfic and to be honest, I like this more than the actual episode. It is way more suspenseful and full of exciting moments, can't wait for the next chapter!
I love this fanfic and to be honest, I like this more than the actual episode. It is way more suspenseful and full of exciting moments, can't wait for the next chapter!
8/30/2015 c6 Wolfsong
Next chapter, please?
Hate gawdamn cliffhangers. Evil literary device of malisciousness. And of demons. You know how they are on us poor, desolate readers, yes?
Next chapter, please?
Hate gawdamn cliffhangers. Evil literary device of malisciousness. And of demons. You know how they are on us poor, desolate readers, yes?
8/6/2015 c6 2WolfsongDarkforest
Pretty please, continue this story? You've done a really good job so far, and I want to see how it ends!
2WolfsongDarkforestPretty please, continue this story? You've done a really good job so far, and I want to see how it ends!
10/19/2013 c6 Guest92
update I want to know what happens next
update I want to know what happens next