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7/28/2011 c1 51StarDuchess
Oh this was cute! And it seemed you did take my advice and flush out the prose a little bit more. Good. It makes a world of difference.

um, I don't know what happened, but the second half of the fic is all scrunched up in one paragraph. Formatting issues I'll bet. Fix it in Document Manager and then just replace the chapter. Also, colored text does not show up in FF; you can only use bold, italics and underline. But even so, I could still tell which one was the conscience.

Good to see you writing some more!
7/20/2011 c1 ThaHPFAN
IT WAS FINE ;)

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