
5/6/2017 c1 Guest
Meh, I'm not really interested in this story. It would have helped if it was a sad/child friendly fanfic and NOT a romance one. Seriously, that's the problem with bronies. They're just too obsessed with inappropriate stuff even though I am a brony myself but I would never do anything like this and stoop that low. However though, the only thing that interested me was the authour's note, namely when you mentioned A Goofy Movie. Now as much as I LOVE Goofy, I don't really like the film that much due to the horrible *shudders* Max/Roxanne thing... The only things I ever liked though were two particular catchy songs, on the open road and nobody else but you. Believe me, those two songs get in my head I end up wanting to play them over and over. Anyway, getting back on topic, if you're taking request, and I doubt you will considering nobody reads reviews anymore, after certain MLP episodes involving Applebloom and Applejack for example: 'Somepony to watch over me' and 'The cart before the ponies' I've noticed that Applejack and Applebloom really remind me of Max and Goofy. You know like when AJ kept embarrassing here little sis? Similarites are endless! So, considering I probably won't get those Goofy songs out my head anytime soon, could you pretty please do a parody of a few scenes from Goofy movie, namely certain songs? Gee this review is long. I think you'd better take my request before this review gets any LOOOOOOOOOOONGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER!
Meh, I'm not really interested in this story. It would have helped if it was a sad/child friendly fanfic and NOT a romance one. Seriously, that's the problem with bronies. They're just too obsessed with inappropriate stuff even though I am a brony myself but I would never do anything like this and stoop that low. However though, the only thing that interested me was the authour's note, namely when you mentioned A Goofy Movie. Now as much as I LOVE Goofy, I don't really like the film that much due to the horrible *shudders* Max/Roxanne thing... The only things I ever liked though were two particular catchy songs, on the open road and nobody else but you. Believe me, those two songs get in my head I end up wanting to play them over and over. Anyway, getting back on topic, if you're taking request, and I doubt you will considering nobody reads reviews anymore, after certain MLP episodes involving Applebloom and Applejack for example: 'Somepony to watch over me' and 'The cart before the ponies' I've noticed that Applejack and Applebloom really remind me of Max and Goofy. You know like when AJ kept embarrassing here little sis? Similarites are endless! So, considering I probably won't get those Goofy songs out my head anytime soon, could you pretty please do a parody of a few scenes from Goofy movie, namely certain songs? Gee this review is long. I think you'd better take my request before this review gets any LOOOOOOOOOOONGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER!
8/4/2012 c1
2GAMMA DAWN14
GAMMA:Ending rushed? I think not. Well I don't think it's rushed at any point. I really enjoyed this!
DAWN 14: Will there be a sequal?
GAMMA: Give him time to think and there just might be one.

GAMMA:Ending rushed? I think not. Well I don't think it's rushed at any point. I really enjoyed this!
DAWN 14: Will there be a sequal?
GAMMA: Give him time to think and there just might be one.
1/17/2012 c1
11Quiet Breeze
That was really funny and very cute at the same time! You did a great job! :D

That was really funny and very cute at the same time! You did a great job! :D
8/27/2011 c1 Just Defender
Now THIS is a great MLP story. Original male character, good plot, this is great! Try doing some for the other girls.
Now THIS is a great MLP story. Original male character, good plot, this is great! Try doing some for the other girls.
7/25/2011 c1
48Evowizard25
Loved the story, but is it connected with the previous ones. I also like how whenever Rarity hears something she doesn't like, a hair twings out of place. (Interesting character quality in your stories.) And yeah, I can see Applejack rather stubborn on the love issue. One last thing, why is that most of the OC male characters in your stories hate Pinkie Pie's parties. The reason completely eludes me. I shall wait until the next story of yours.
Sincerely,
Evo

Loved the story, but is it connected with the previous ones. I also like how whenever Rarity hears something she doesn't like, a hair twings out of place. (Interesting character quality in your stories.) And yeah, I can see Applejack rather stubborn on the love issue. One last thing, why is that most of the OC male characters in your stories hate Pinkie Pie's parties. The reason completely eludes me. I shall wait until the next story of yours.
Sincerely,
Evo