3/24/2013 c5 blank
luv it! they're so dang cute!
luv it! they're so dang cute!
3/24/2013 c4 blank
aww, i luv ur writing, just LUV IT!
aww, i luv ur writing, just LUV IT!
3/11/2013 c4 ChristyWIX
Awwww, that was soooo sweet . . . big fan of his word vomit! YAY! Glad to know I was wrong about Jessica coming up to ruin things. Whew. Thank you for sharing this with us in the fandom. Christy
Awwww, that was soooo sweet . . . big fan of his word vomit! YAY! Glad to know I was wrong about Jessica coming up to ruin things. Whew. Thank you for sharing this with us in the fandom. Christy
3/11/2013 c3 ChristyWIX
Well, I can already see the Jessiskank will come up to Edward and ask if he received her singy thingie and he will be stupid enough to think it WAS from her not Bella . . . argh! Well, I certainly hope that Mike Newton comes up to Jessiskank first to give his "thanks" . . . that would be best.
Onwards . . .
Well, I can already see the Jessiskank will come up to Edward and ask if he received her singy thingie and he will be stupid enough to think it WAS from her not Bella . . . argh! Well, I certainly hope that Mike Newton comes up to Jessiskank first to give his "thanks" . . . that would be best.
Onwards . . .
3/11/2013 c2 ChristyWIX
No, kisses like that one do not happen for no reason. I like that she is smarter than that. She knows he likes her now. Now she just needs to play this right. Me likey. :)
Christy
No, kisses like that one do not happen for no reason. I like that she is smarter than that. She knows he likes her now. Now she just needs to play this right. Me likey. :)
Christy
3/11/2013 c1 ChristyWIX
New to you? Well, I think I am? Hmmm. Either way, I read one of your stories, the one you posted for the Hey Ho contest . . . at least I think it was yours. I wanted to read another of yours and this is it.
I have a feeling this Edward, already likes this Bella . . . she is oblivious to it though . . . as evidenced through this very first chapter.
Loved how she told of Jessica . . . really loved the nickname Jessiskank . . . too funny!
Onwards . . .
New to you? Well, I think I am? Hmmm. Either way, I read one of your stories, the one you posted for the Hey Ho contest . . . at least I think it was yours. I wanted to read another of yours and this is it.
I have a feeling this Edward, already likes this Bella . . . she is oblivious to it though . . . as evidenced through this very first chapter.
Loved how she told of Jessica . . . really loved the nickname Jessiskank . . . too funny!
Onwards . . .
8/27/2012 c1 13don't.diss.the.puff
I think it's a really sweet idea for a fic, and you wrote it really well!
I think it's a really sweet idea for a fic, and you wrote it really well!
5/16/2012 c5 6Light1172
Love it! I like how you incorporated a lot of music into this chapter. It really sums them up well.
Love it! I like how you incorporated a lot of music into this chapter. It really sums them up well.
1/2/2012 c4 Sesshoumaru'smate4ever
DUDE I KNOW HOW AWESOME THE MOVIE WAS CAUSE I WATCHED IT WITH YOU IN YOUR THIRD TIME I THINK? EMMEY BEAR IS JUST SO FREAKIN ADORABLE! ADOR ABLE! 3 RUDEWARD IS JUST SO FORCEFUL! I CALL DIBS! SO HE IS ALSO MINE! HEEHEE! "Her changing clothes. I gulped..." SO PERVERTED! ;)"I needed to focus on the task at hand, not how amazing her skin would feel with mine after I discarded –" SUCH A BOI! )*_*(
Oh crapping mother of fish paste - THIS SOUNDS HONESTLY DISTRESSFULY DITASTLEFUL! "Gah, I uh . . . Dammit." YOU MY DEAR FRIEND(EDWARD) EVEN SOUND LIKE A ADORABLE DUFUS! SINCE YOU ARE ADORABLE I WILL FORGIVE YOU!"She intrigues me and astounds me..." I THINK I JUST SELF COM BUSTED! IN YOUR TERMS 'PISSED MY PANTS' WILL WORK.
"... she sings to heartbreaking Paramore songs alone in her truck in the school parking lot." SOUNDS SO SAD! FOREVER ALONE! ;A;
"just kicked my heart in the ass" - MADE MI THINK OF HEART OF MY BOTTOM! HURHURHUR!
OMG HE BROKE UP W/ TANYA SO HE CAN COURT HER TO HIS HEARTS DESIRES! OMG LOCKER ROOM FIGHTS! SO SEXY ;) I THINK ALL MY REVIEWS ARE PUT INTO THE CATEGORY "WORD VOMIT"
Oh my God this psycho is obsessed with metears.
LOL I LOVE HOW SHE ANSWERS WITH I DONT LIKE COLD BROCCOLI AFTER HE POURED AD SQUEEZED HIS HEART OUT TO HER AND SHE JUST ANSWERS WITH HER HATE OF CONSUMING COLD BROCCOLI! I LOVE HOW AUTHORS DO THIS AFTER A PAINSTAKINGLY EMOTIONAL CONFESSION AND SHE JUST ANSWERS WITH "I DONT LIKE COLD BROCCOLI MAN! I JUST DONT LIKE IT YAH KNOW? ITS SO FREAKIN ICKY ON HOW COLD IT IS AND CRANBERRY LIP GLOSS TASTE AMAZING ( BET SHE WANT HIM TO AGREE ;)
WOW BELLA IS SO FORCEFUL! O.o
"... arousing in their amount of passion. A growl escaped my chest..."
"... and grabbed my face." I ALSO WANT TO GRAB HIS FACE! HUHUHHUUUHUHUHHHHUUUUUUR!
"I used to wear feety pajamas til I was ten, I have an extensive collection of mint condition Beetles albums...And I play the piano in the mornings while wearing my favorite pair of blue monkey slippers." DUDE CAN THIS GUY GET ANYMORE DREAMY? GOSH I WANT A PIECE OF THAT YUM!
AND HEY MY MOM MIGHT LET MI GO TO THE TWILIGHT MIDNIGHT THING NEXT YEAR IF MY AUNTIE COMES WITH MI! LOL NEXT TIME IMMA BRINGING A TISSUE BOX IF I GO TO THE TWILIGHT PREMIER WITH YAH THIS YEAR ;)
DUDE I KNOW HOW AWESOME THE MOVIE WAS CAUSE I WATCHED IT WITH YOU IN YOUR THIRD TIME I THINK? EMMEY BEAR IS JUST SO FREAKIN ADORABLE! ADOR ABLE! 3 RUDEWARD IS JUST SO FORCEFUL! I CALL DIBS! SO HE IS ALSO MINE! HEEHEE! "Her changing clothes. I gulped..." SO PERVERTED! ;)"I needed to focus on the task at hand, not how amazing her skin would feel with mine after I discarded –" SUCH A BOI! )*_*(
Oh crapping mother of fish paste - THIS SOUNDS HONESTLY DISTRESSFULY DITASTLEFUL! "Gah, I uh . . . Dammit." YOU MY DEAR FRIEND(EDWARD) EVEN SOUND LIKE A ADORABLE DUFUS! SINCE YOU ARE ADORABLE I WILL FORGIVE YOU!"She intrigues me and astounds me..." I THINK I JUST SELF COM BUSTED! IN YOUR TERMS 'PISSED MY PANTS' WILL WORK.
"... she sings to heartbreaking Paramore songs alone in her truck in the school parking lot." SOUNDS SO SAD! FOREVER ALONE! ;A;
"just kicked my heart in the ass" - MADE MI THINK OF HEART OF MY BOTTOM! HURHURHUR!
OMG HE BROKE UP W/ TANYA SO HE CAN COURT HER TO HIS HEARTS DESIRES! OMG LOCKER ROOM FIGHTS! SO SEXY ;) I THINK ALL MY REVIEWS ARE PUT INTO THE CATEGORY "WORD VOMIT"
Oh my God this psycho is obsessed with metears.
LOL I LOVE HOW SHE ANSWERS WITH I DONT LIKE COLD BROCCOLI AFTER HE POURED AD SQUEEZED HIS HEART OUT TO HER AND SHE JUST ANSWERS WITH HER HATE OF CONSUMING COLD BROCCOLI! I LOVE HOW AUTHORS DO THIS AFTER A PAINSTAKINGLY EMOTIONAL CONFESSION AND SHE JUST ANSWERS WITH "I DONT LIKE COLD BROCCOLI MAN! I JUST DONT LIKE IT YAH KNOW? ITS SO FREAKIN ICKY ON HOW COLD IT IS AND CRANBERRY LIP GLOSS TASTE AMAZING ( BET SHE WANT HIM TO AGREE ;)
WOW BELLA IS SO FORCEFUL! O.o
"... arousing in their amount of passion. A growl escaped my chest..."
"... and grabbed my face." I ALSO WANT TO GRAB HIS FACE! HUHUHHUUUHUHUHHHHUUUUUUR!
"I used to wear feety pajamas til I was ten, I have an extensive collection of mint condition Beetles albums...And I play the piano in the mornings while wearing my favorite pair of blue monkey slippers." DUDE CAN THIS GUY GET ANYMORE DREAMY? GOSH I WANT A PIECE OF THAT YUM!
AND HEY MY MOM MIGHT LET MI GO TO THE TWILIGHT MIDNIGHT THING NEXT YEAR IF MY AUNTIE COMES WITH MI! LOL NEXT TIME IMMA BRINGING A TISSUE BOX IF I GO TO THE TWILIGHT PREMIER WITH YAH THIS YEAR ;)
1/2/2012 c3 Sesshoumaru'smate4ever
I LOVE YOUR FREAKIN BEANIE! ONLY EXCEPTION : SHOULD HAVE KNOWN. OK IF THEY HAVE AMAZED THIS YEAR FOR VALENTINES THIS YEAR I HOPE YOU SEND THIS TOO MI UNLESSS THEIR IS SOMEHOW A MUCH MORE AMAZING SONG AND I WILL SEND ANYTHING ALEX GOOT RELATED TO YOU MY DEAR FRIEND IF I REMEMBER THAT FIVE DOLLARED FEE! I JUST FREAKIN LOVE THAT SONG MAN! ;A; I JUST FREAKIN ADORE IT! THE HEART OF MY BOTTOM JUST KIKILLS TO BE LOVED THAT FREAKIN MUCH ;) LOL ALICE CANT SING! JUST LOVE IT!
EWWW! OVERPOWERING PERFUME JUST MAKES MI GAGG! ITS A REFLEX I TELL YAH! I HINESTLY DONT UNDERSTAND PEOPLE WHO BATHES IN PERFUME! I MEAN THERE THE ONES CLOSEST TO THE SMELL YET THEIR NOSES ARE CRAWLING AWAY FOR SHELTER? WHAT IS WRONG WITH THEM MENTALLY I SEEM TO ALWAYS ASK MYSELF. OH WAIT. THIS IS JESSICA. SHE OBVIOUSLY GOT A FAKE NOISE! THIS IS THE ONLY POSSIBLE REASON UNLESS SHE HOPES TO KILL PEOPLE ONE BY ONE WITH HER SCENT. JESSICA YOU SKANK!SANK! STANK! SKUNK! SPANK! SHANK! SKIN TIGHTJEANS... I WANT TO BE IN MARSHALL LEE'S SKIN TIGHT JEANS ;) LOL IKE NEWTON! THEY ARE SUCH A CANON LOVE COUPLE! THE MOST UHHH COUPLE IN THA WORLD! GABOOYA! GOSH! IF I WAS IN HIS PLACE I WOULD BE SO EMBARRASED! GOSH THE BLUSHIES ARE GONNA KILL MI! /
I LOVE YOUR FREAKIN BEANIE! ONLY EXCEPTION : SHOULD HAVE KNOWN. OK IF THEY HAVE AMAZED THIS YEAR FOR VALENTINES THIS YEAR I HOPE YOU SEND THIS TOO MI UNLESSS THEIR IS SOMEHOW A MUCH MORE AMAZING SONG AND I WILL SEND ANYTHING ALEX GOOT RELATED TO YOU MY DEAR FRIEND IF I REMEMBER THAT FIVE DOLLARED FEE! I JUST FREAKIN LOVE THAT SONG MAN! ;A; I JUST FREAKIN ADORE IT! THE HEART OF MY BOTTOM JUST KIKILLS TO BE LOVED THAT FREAKIN MUCH ;) LOL ALICE CANT SING! JUST LOVE IT!
EWWW! OVERPOWERING PERFUME JUST MAKES MI GAGG! ITS A REFLEX I TELL YAH! I HINESTLY DONT UNDERSTAND PEOPLE WHO BATHES IN PERFUME! I MEAN THERE THE ONES CLOSEST TO THE SMELL YET THEIR NOSES ARE CRAWLING AWAY FOR SHELTER? WHAT IS WRONG WITH THEM MENTALLY I SEEM TO ALWAYS ASK MYSELF. OH WAIT. THIS IS JESSICA. SHE OBVIOUSLY GOT A FAKE NOISE! THIS IS THE ONLY POSSIBLE REASON UNLESS SHE HOPES TO KILL PEOPLE ONE BY ONE WITH HER SCENT. JESSICA YOU SKANK!SANK! STANK! SKUNK! SPANK! SHANK! SKIN TIGHTJEANS... I WANT TO BE IN MARSHALL LEE'S SKIN TIGHT JEANS ;) LOL IKE NEWTON! THEY ARE SUCH A CANON LOVE COUPLE! THE MOST UHHH COUPLE IN THA WORLD! GABOOYA! GOSH! IF I WAS IN HIS PLACE I WOULD BE SO EMBARRASED! GOSH THE BLUSHIES ARE GONNA KILL MI! /
1/2/2012 c2 Sesshoumaru'smate4ever
Oh Sweet Lord Baby Jesus in A Cradle on A Haystack Up in Heaven! WOMAN! IS THIS THE TYPE OF KISSING YOU DREAM OF! I KNEW YOU WOULD MAKE HIM A PARAMORE LOVER BUT IT WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER IF YOU'D ALSO INCLUDE ALEX GOOT! MAH BABY! IT WOULD MAKE EDWARD MORE APPEAL ABLE IN MY EYES! AND OH MY HEART! HE PREFERS BRUNETS! I ALWAYS LOVE IT WHEN PEOPLE PUT IT IN THEIR STORIES! AND I HAVE NO IDEA WHY BUT IT GIVES MI HAPPY BUBBLES! AND DONT MAKE MI COME OVER AND SMACK YOU IN THE HEAD!That shouldn't have happened.
I shouldn't have done that.
Sorry.
SERIOUSLY! WELL ONLY GOOD THING THAT WONT MAKE MI COME OVER AND SMACK YOU IN THE HEAD RIGHT NOW WITH A BASEBALL BAT IS THAT BELLA ACTUALLY HAS A BACKBONE! SO BY THE TIME YOU READ THIS WILL PROBABLY AND HOUR AFTER I "REVIEW" WOMAN!
Oh Sweet Lord Baby Jesus in A Cradle on A Haystack Up in Heaven! WOMAN! IS THIS THE TYPE OF KISSING YOU DREAM OF! I KNEW YOU WOULD MAKE HIM A PARAMORE LOVER BUT IT WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER IF YOU'D ALSO INCLUDE ALEX GOOT! MAH BABY! IT WOULD MAKE EDWARD MORE APPEAL ABLE IN MY EYES! AND OH MY HEART! HE PREFERS BRUNETS! I ALWAYS LOVE IT WHEN PEOPLE PUT IT IN THEIR STORIES! AND I HAVE NO IDEA WHY BUT IT GIVES MI HAPPY BUBBLES! AND DONT MAKE MI COME OVER AND SMACK YOU IN THE HEAD!That shouldn't have happened.
I shouldn't have done that.
Sorry.
SERIOUSLY! WELL ONLY GOOD THING THAT WONT MAKE MI COME OVER AND SMACK YOU IN THE HEAD RIGHT NOW WITH A BASEBALL BAT IS THAT BELLA ACTUALLY HAS A BACKBONE! SO BY THE TIME YOU READ THIS WILL PROBABLY AND HOUR AFTER I "REVIEW" WOMAN!