for Harry Snape and the Sorcerer's Stone6/4/2013 c6 Guest
Keep going so u can finish your story because I want to know what happen next
Keep going so u can finish your story because I want to know what happen next
6/3/2013 c6 Rainfire of Riverclan
I really like your plot for this story. It seems rather unique. I can't wait to see where you take it next. Keep writing!
I really like your plot for this story. It seems rather unique. I can't wait to see where you take it next. Keep writing!
6/3/2013 c6 Amber
I absolutely LOVE your story! I really enjoy it! I wonder what house Harry will be in! :) Such a good idea! Are you alright- like no depression ?
I absolutely LOVE your story! I really enjoy it! I wonder what house Harry will be in! :) Such a good idea! Are you alright- like no depression ?
6/3/2013 c6 00
The story is better than average; please do not stick notes into the story; it slows the flow.
As for writing quirks. you do not to tell us ... a very unprepared ... just ... Harry fell over ... does the job.
Hope your health improves.. Take care and keep writing.
The story is better than average; please do not stick notes into the story; it slows the flow.
As for writing quirks. you do not to tell us ... a very unprepared ... just ... Harry fell over ... does the job.
Hope your health improves.. Take care and keep writing.
5/13/2013 c5 Debbie
I would like to read more of this story. So please keep writting thank you
I would like to read more of this story. So please keep writting thank you
5/13/2013 c5 
5Le Diablo Blanc2
i would love to read more of this hopefully where harry is a slytherine
5Le Diablo Blanc2i would love to read more of this hopefully where harry is a slytherine