8/16/2011 c1 Schueberry
I really hope you update this soon! This is a great start and we need more of these two. :)
I really hope you update this soon! This is a great start and we need more of these two. :)
8/14/2011 c1 Elle Loves Glee
I'm really looking forward to what you have planned for this story! I love me some Will/Rachel!
I'm really looking forward to what you have planned for this story! I love me some Will/Rachel!
8/7/2011 c1 thecabademyis
There are no words for how much I already love the first chapter.I really can't wait for the next one! :D
There are no words for how much I already love the first chapter.I really can't wait for the next one! :D
8/1/2011 c1 7Coconutters
Oh my...my my my my. Two years huh? It doesn't show. I was immediately pulled in by the usage of words. I love that it's repetitive and you mix up the tenses. Really adds a layer to the story. I have been away from the fanfic world for almost two months because I was at a summer camp being a counselor and I am so excited to see so many new stories on here and the notion of Will pretending to not be pretending is so heart wrenching. I love it! Dark and twisty and angsty is how I like it and you are doing a great job at that! Welcome to the Schueberry ship! I look forward to reading more of those story and more of you in the future!
Oh my...my my my my. Two years huh? It doesn't show. I was immediately pulled in by the usage of words. I love that it's repetitive and you mix up the tenses. Really adds a layer to the story. I have been away from the fanfic world for almost two months because I was at a summer camp being a counselor and I am so excited to see so many new stories on here and the notion of Will pretending to not be pretending is so heart wrenching. I love it! Dark and twisty and angsty is how I like it and you are doing a great job at that! Welcome to the Schueberry ship! I look forward to reading more of those story and more of you in the future!
7/27/2011 c1 8MegWasDorkyOnce
Just letting you know I am fangirling and flailing and waiting desperately for another chapter.
This is genius.
Just letting you know I am fangirling and flailing and waiting desperately for another chapter.
This is genius.
7/24/2011 c1 Vampyresss
Love love love it!
I've always hoped someone would be inspired by that pic of Matt and Lea playing Brad and Janet to write a schueberry fic.
I'm very excited to see where this goes
Love love love it!
I've always hoped someone would be inspired by that pic of Matt and Lea playing Brad and Janet to write a schueberry fic.
I'm very excited to see where this goes
7/22/2011 c1 1hopelessandhelpless
This story looks amazing already, I can't wait to read more. I also second what you said, there aren't enough Will/Rachel fics.
This story looks amazing already, I can't wait to read more. I also second what you said, there aren't enough Will/Rachel fics.
7/22/2011 c1 10wistfulwatcher
I love love love this! I love the hint of a backstory, and the introduction to where they are now, and especially your depiction of Will's feelings for Rachel as well as how you described his relationship with Terri and Emma. You managed to describe his feelings for Rachel as gradual and over the span of three years and portray his confusion in just a few sentences; it really felt full and earned, where he is now, if that makes sense. And I agree completely with your description of Emma and Terri-perfect.
Can't wait for more!
I love love love this! I love the hint of a backstory, and the introduction to where they are now, and especially your depiction of Will's feelings for Rachel as well as how you described his relationship with Terri and Emma. You managed to describe his feelings for Rachel as gradual and over the span of three years and portray his confusion in just a few sentences; it really felt full and earned, where he is now, if that makes sense. And I agree completely with your description of Emma and Terri-perfect.
Can't wait for more!
7/22/2011 c1 Aj
We NEED more shueberry stories up! :). You did a great job with this chaoter can't wait to see where this goes. Hope you're a fat updater :)
We NEED more shueberry stories up! :). You did a great job with this chaoter can't wait to see where this goes. Hope you're a fat updater :)
7/21/2011 c1 23BuffyAnne
I already love this and am very excited to see where you take it. It's a very interesting start.
I already love this and am very excited to see where you take it. It's a very interesting start.
7/21/2011 c1 5Rainedonmyparade
I loved this! I love how Will is so hung up on Rachel and I love how, even after so much time has passed, she still occupies his thoughts! I love the idea behind this fic and I'm really excited to see where you take the story! I'll be waiting patiently for another update...great job! :)
I loved this! I love how Will is so hung up on Rachel and I love how, even after so much time has passed, she still occupies his thoughts! I love the idea behind this fic and I'm really excited to see where you take the story! I'll be waiting patiently for another update...great job! :)